Recent Comments

Martin
1/16/22, 10:08 AM
I haven't read this yet, I'm reserving this for later as I think it will be great fun to read. Just wanted to say that you've created an awesome avatar pic for yourself!

HelplessBrainwashedSlave
1/16/22, 10:31 AM
@Martin Thanks! Really excited to publish my first story on the site.
1/16/22, 7:23 AM
i do wish there was more of a payoff. it doesnt feel like the story has a proper conclusion. perhaps an epilogue of Jonathon serving as Jay's butler? otherwise good!
1/16/22, 7:21 AM
I love the transformation of the Hardy Men from smart, classy men to lewd himbos. Even daddy Fenton isn't safe from his inner bottom :) Looking forward to the humiliation of the family as the cum closer together :)
Jun 27, 2018
1/16/22, 6:34 AM
i feel the need to let you know this is my favourite story on the site, and i have it bookmarked, and it's the first thing that comes up in my browser when i press "g". no cap
1/16/22, 6:22 AM
Mmmmm. I must admit that while preppy transformations are fun, this story is a little too abusive for my tastes. Plus--and perhaps you are waiting to reveal some kind of twist--the changes don't have any motivation. Thomas is furious at Jack's suggestions, goes to his room, and then--without any input from Jack or indication of external stimuli (music being played, video being watched, etc.), simply agrees with them instead. As such, the story goes from "Guy hypnotizes boyfriend to be preppy" to "Jerk abuses, gaslights, and torments someone to do whatever he says." And that, to me, isn't sexy.
1/16/22, 2:05 AM
I went ahead and added the no-sex tag, as I think that's one tag that should not be skipped (when appropriate). This was quite the detailed transformation!

1/16/22, 4:43 AM
@amul Ahhh, I did not see your comment that this was going to be a series, I thought it was a complete story. I removed the tag I added in case you do include sex scenes in future chapters, since tags are inherited in later stories in a series.
1/16/22, 4:19 AM
Great work, please continue, really want to see Brice's transformation
1/16/22, 3:18 AM
really hope to see this story continue, I've come back to read what you have so far several times.
Van
1/16/22, 1:45 AM
this was really hot. i love it when guys write these sort of suit mind control stories. i love all the details you manage to add.
nycboot
1/16/22, 12:20 AM
Nice story! As a big opera fan, I'm happy you included the reference. :)

Jonathan
1/16/22, 1:30 AM
you're welcome@nycboot. I thought it would be a nice touch to show his change from a college guy to a man. There are several more chapters coming btw.