Recent Comments

1/16/22, 6:22 AM
Mmmmm. I must admit that while preppy transformations are fun, this story is a little too abusive for my tastes. Plus--and perhaps you are waiting to reveal some kind of twist--the changes don't have any motivation. Thomas is furious at Jack's suggestions, goes to his room, and then--without any input from Jack or indication of external stimuli (music being played, video being watched, etc.), simply agrees with them instead. As such, the story goes from "Guy hypnotizes boyfriend to be preppy" to "Jerk abuses, gaslights, and torments someone to do whatever he says." And that, to me, isn't sexy.
1/16/22, 2:05 AM
I went ahead and added the no-sex tag, as I think that's one tag that should not be skipped (when appropriate). This was quite the detailed transformation!

1/16/22, 4:43 AM
@amul Ahhh, I did not see your comment that this was going to be a series, I thought it was a complete story. I removed the tag I added in case you do include sex scenes in future chapters, since tags are inherited in later stories in a series.
1/16/22, 4:19 AM
Great work, please continue, really want to see Brice's transformation
1/16/22, 3:18 AM
really hope to see this story continue, I've come back to read what you have so far several times.
Van
1/16/22, 1:45 AM
this was really hot. i love it when guys write these sort of suit mind control stories. i love all the details you manage to add.
nycboot
1/16/22, 12:20 AM
Nice story! As a big opera fan, I'm happy you included the reference. :)

Jonathan
1/16/22, 1:30 AM
you're welcome@nycboot. I thought it would be a nice touch to show his change from a college guy to a man. There are several more chapters coming btw.
Tyrol
1/15/22, 7:33 PM
an incredibly written story! i was very invested and i love how you write submissiveness without necessarily a dominant masculine

1/15/22, 11:12 PM
@Tyrol I am so glad to hear you enjoyed it and were invested, and especially love hearing what spoke to you! Thank you for taking the time to encourage me.
1/15/22, 10:17 PM
Haha someone enjoys korean light novels/manhwa. Enjoying the sex, but curious how the game like aspect plays in the future. Keep them comming!
1/15/22, 9:34 PM
I had wondered if they rejected Nils because he had already worn
1/15/22, 8:37 PM
20 year old is not a millennial. That's a zoomer.