Recent Comments

1/14/22, 6:45 AM
such a good series! But is tim kinda hitting on superboy? would love to see that one appen

1/14/22, 6:59 AM
@Anon529373 Tim is in the next part of this story heavily
9/22/21, 9:21 PM
I've come back to this story a few times ow and it never fails to please! I'm into it from start to finish!

9/22/21, 11:09 PM
@time.to.occur Glad to hear, Time. It's definitely one of the stories I'm most proud of :)

1/14/22, 5:53 AM
@Dreamweavr You should be proud it's gotten me off about 30 times.
May 10, 2019
1/14/22, 5:26 AM
hot story , wish the transition from straight to gay was a little more difficult for the daddy but overall still a hot little tale . def recommend
Anonymous
1/11/22, 8:22 PM
This was beyond hot! I loved the look you chose for Noah, he's so hot. The perfect kind of man to be dominated.

1/14/22, 4:48 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)
Anonymous
1/11/22, 2:11 PM
Story is really, really hot. Love sexy muscle men. I'm hard just thinking about Noah. One thing: you need to do a better job in editing. There are so many misspellings and grammar errors that it makes reading the story a little hard to read. When you just fix that up, your story will go from a '9' to a '10'.

1/14/22, 4:48 AM
Hi, I'm glad you liked it and thank you for your feedback, I really apreciate it. I will re-read the whole story within the next few days and correct the mistakes. Again, thank you for your feedback and I hope to see you in future stories :)
1/14/22, 1:32 AM
So happy to see you here! Have been a big fan of your work since way back lol. I know it is a bit iffy regarding the rules in this site but I hope to see more stories including established characters like this or real-life celebs. Great writing as always!!!
1/14/22, 1:25 AM
While this story is well written, so far I don't find it in the least bit 'sexy', nor is there much in the way of mind control...I will follow for at least one more chapter to see where this goes, but honestly What's with polo shirts & bow ties, etc..so what ???
1/14/22, 1:03 AM
Nice start! It looks like the poor narrator didn't come anywhere close to completing his training. Perhaps the officer will help set things right.
Sep 16, 2020
1/14/22, 12:02 AM
That was really fun. I totally fell for the misdirect about what was causing it. I wonder how much it'll wear off when they get back home and if there are any other changes coming for them. Davis came home with a beach bod... the result of lots of exercise, or perhaps the diet has something to do with it?
Jonathan
1/13/22, 12:00 AM
I quite agree. One should dress like an adult but a gentleman should always be suited unless the circumstances dictate otherwise.

1/13/22, 11:53 PM
@Jonathan Right! ;-)