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1/13/22, 6:30 PM
"I wear size 14 shoes, which is a real pain since most stores only stock up to 12 or 13." This is the realest thing ever written in a stroke story.
1/13/22, 6:28 PM
Pretty much my fantasy
1/13/22, 6:21 PM
Great start! Can't wait to see more of this story. Do hope that in the end the officer really is trustworthy though
1/13/22, 5:21 PM
Thanks for all the positive comments everyone!! I really appreciate them. I'll write a sequel for sure, I got a few ideas brewing for where the story can go next. We'll definitely get to know more characters, and I think we'll see Tony find his place within the pack while finishing his training lol.
Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 5:13 PM
Ooh, this was fun. I'll start adding more fruit to my diet going forward...
1/13/22, 4:21 PM
I hope to see part 2 soon
Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 4:07 PM
This was absolutely delicious! I almost don’t need the fruit after reading it. (Still do, though.) It’s very wholesome straight to gay. It’s not written as comeuppance, the characters aren’t crazy anxious and angry; they’re loving it, and I’m loving that. The fruit is a really interesting and hot plot device. I’m interested to think more about what it can do, and what it does do. And if there’s things they haven’t been told about it, as (hopefully wholesome) surprises. Maybe I’ll write something!
Anonymous
1/13/22, 1:52 PM
right up my alley. the "meat" of the action could have stood to be fleshed out as it were, but terrific description and background setup. For dick-headed detail: background for Dumbo gives us his realization and tacit approval of being humiliated and used for his big cock. Dad's control over his body, cock and joy in making Dumbo flustered. by "meat" i mean the acceptance stage. "Dumbo" just sorta accepts his role as a stud, we don't get much of the inner conflict or tension at his breaking point as it sort of just resolves as "i wanted to kill him, I didn't" and then months pass. we get the idea that it just turns out he liked being a dumb breeding horse for his daddy instead but i would have loved to spend more time there and see how Dad turned that confrontation into role acceptance.
Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 8:58 AM
How in the world has everyone slept on this story?! Hot damn. Hidden gem indeed. What about the rest of their vacation? I want more!
1/13/22, 5:45 AM
love it! like the ensnared village boys