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Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 5:13 PM
Ooh, this was fun. I'll start adding more fruit to my diet going forward...
1/13/22, 4:21 PM
I hope to see part 2 soon
Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 4:07 PM
This was absolutely delicious! I almost don’t need the fruit after reading it. (Still do, though.) It’s very wholesome straight to gay. It’s not written as comeuppance, the characters aren’t crazy anxious and angry; they’re loving it, and I’m loving that. The fruit is a really interesting and hot plot device. I’m interested to think more about what it can do, and what it does do. And if there’s things they haven’t been told about it, as (hopefully wholesome) surprises. Maybe I’ll write something!
Anonymous
1/13/22, 1:52 PM
right up my alley. the "meat" of the action could have stood to be fleshed out as it were, but terrific description and background setup. For dick-headed detail: background for Dumbo gives us his realization and tacit approval of being humiliated and used for his big cock. Dad's control over his body, cock and joy in making Dumbo flustered. by "meat" i mean the acceptance stage. "Dumbo" just sorta accepts his role as a stud, we don't get much of the inner conflict or tension at his breaking point as it sort of just resolves as "i wanted to kill him, I didn't" and then months pass. we get the idea that it just turns out he liked being a dumb breeding horse for his daddy instead but i would have loved to spend more time there and see how Dad turned that confrontation into role acceptance.
Sep 16, 2020
1/13/22, 8:58 AM
How in the world has everyone slept on this story?! Hot damn. Hidden gem indeed. What about the rest of their vacation? I want more!
1/13/22, 5:45 AM
love it! like the ensnared village boys
1/13/22, 5:39 AM
I like that tag: another day, another rung down the ladder for Conner. Acceptance is being to dawn.
1/12/22, 11:59 PM
Jesus Christ this is a hot story.

1/13/22, 5:37 AM
@amul Thank you!!!
Jockmorphr
1/13/22, 1:40 AM
@stimle It is so great to see you here and wonderful to be reading your stories again. Yours were some of the first hypno and domination stories that I ever read back when I first started seeking out gay fiction. They've been favorites of mine ever since. There is something about your writing (the characters, the scenes, and the sex) that is highly arousing. I hope you'll favor us with more of your writing!

1/13/22, 5:37 AM
Hi there, @Jockmorphr - Thanks so much for the kind words. I plan to repost more of my older work while I get back to writing new stories.
Kristoff_ColBry
1/13/22, 2:11 AM
wow!!! so hot!!

1/13/22, 5:33 AM
@Kristoff_ColBry Thank you! Much appreciated.