Recent Comments

1/12/22, 2:51 AM
This is such a fantastic series! I am really excited to read more!
1/12/22, 2:08 AM
Hey Free Thinker -- When you had the Baron giving Timmy instructions about his cock hardening and his sac tightening . . . I was feeling my own member doin' it. I also like your carefulness about your writing, sentence structure, having edited out errors in grammar or spelling. (The "grammar Nazi" in me, I guess.) Your style of describing is novel-like, too, as was noted by another commenter on Part I of the story. I suspect that you could write porn or non-porn well. You have the skills and the knowledge, and a good sense for describing a place, a setting, etc., as you did with most of Part I.
Anonymous
1/12/22, 1:58 AM
Loved the back story. Thanks.
1/11/22, 4:34 PM
Just great! hope we see more please

Willie Cici
1/12/22, 1:56 AM
@Sinatraguy74 That was the last chapter.
1/12/22, 12:10 AM
“But please, ‘Professor’ sounds too formal. Call me ‘Master’.” ...... LOL Nice story. Lucky boys.
Anonymous
1/11/22, 8:39 PM
absolutely loved this one, such a hot and sweet fairy tale!

1/11/22, 10:31 PM
@Anonymous I'm so glad to hear it and appreciate you taking the time to say so! Comments are author fuel ✨!
1/11/22, 5:41 PM
However did I miss this way back in 2020? Such a great idea, and great story. And a great excuse to go back to the required reading list and reacquaint myself with all those awesome and hot tales. Thanks for another great read, Derek!

1/11/22, 9:53 PM
Thanks @Lloyd311! This one was a lot of fun to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. The required reading list is made up of some of my favourite stories, so much love to all the authors who helped inspire this one.
Martin
1/11/22, 9:16 PM
@darkfantasy It's difficult to judge this story in such an early stage. The premise is certainly interesting. Remember: The readers usually want to read this to get off, we're all peeping toms turned on by whatever weird and kinky fantasies you put your characters through. So, I'm curious what you're going to come up with in your further chapters!
1/11/22, 9:07 PM
I liked the pacing and dialogue in this story. Snappy and to the point is very much a style I enjoy as well as having some elements of stream of consciousness of the POV character. I think there were many clever little decisions made regarding word choice and what parts of the stream of consciousness were revealed to us the readers to characterise the POV character. I did think the reveal of the curse and where it came from felt a little jarring but it is very understandable given your disclaimer as well as your goal with this piece to flesh out a concept. Highlights were definitely how much you managed to make this character feel real whike being inside their head the whole way. Interesting piece, all in all.