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Anonymous
1/11/22, 4:19 PM
delicious!!!
7B7
1/11/22, 3:28 PM
yeaaaah no
1/11/22, 7:51 AM
This chapter and the chapter where Eli gets taken... dang!!

1/11/22, 2:00 PM
@stimle thanks bud!

Martin
1/11/22, 3:08 PM
@stimle Yeah that's my favorite chapter, too. Eli's conversion is the hottest.
1/11/22, 2:54 PM
I love this story! can't wait for the next one.
1/11/22, 7:54 AM
I have to say, I suspected this outcome early on based on a few clues you dropped, but the way executed it was just spectacular. Just fantastic stuff, Jack.

1/11/22, 1:59 PM
@stimle kind words from you sir
1/11/22, 12:11 PM
A bit of a slapstick type of mind control. It wasn't clear to me what the identity of the first POV person was, which made me a bit confused until the swap in POV.
1/11/22, 10:28 AM
Did you read a lot of the Myth Adventures books by Robert Aspirin? I love so much in both of the stories in this series, Unfortunately, this one ends with the sense that you still had much you wanted to explore, but thought you had let it go on for too long leaving so much fruit on the vine. I actually wish you had let this chapter end at Spurling's Folly and picked up with the same intensity the next part of the quest in a part 3. I also kept thinking this need to be developed into comic like Myth Adventures or Elf Quest.

1/11/22, 12:10 PM
Hey @scudder ! I totally grew up with battered paperback copies of Another Fine Myth and other entries into that series in the house, and I'm flattered by the comparison! I love those books. I guess poor Chance has become Gleep in this situation, motivated by sex rather than food ^^. Thank you for the comment! I totally hear you -- I've been aiming to write and share these past few years to get some perspective on my work, so this is very helpful. I hope to one day rework the series, and I definitely think I could stand to stick with and detail the later parts of the story if that happens! Comments like this are what make me want to. Much appreciated!
1/11/22, 10:59 AM
we getting a part 3+?
1/11/22, 10:19 AM
Amazing. Would love to see what's going on back at the chateau.