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1/5/22, 8:46 PM
The buildup throughout the story, first slowly revealing something is off ("They saw to that"), and then handing out clues about what that might be, makes a great parallel story that unfolds behind the main story. The wording threw me off and made me think of some group like a science experiment, the military, or an agency. I felt he perhaps swung from reserved to exposing himself a bit abruptly. He could easily have reasoned something like "I'm not gonna see these fuckers again, so I don't care." The post-transformation exposé is perhaps a bit overly detailed for something in that moment. I also would have loved the "Not anymore" to be cut and be implied. This is probably just a fixation of mine, but since almost nothing fits anymore and Tanner has seen this already several times, he could toss Richard some immediate tips. "With such a body no one is going to stop you entering a sports goods store. Take flip flops, cut the sides off a T-shirt, and wear your basket shorts as hot pants." Overall a well crafted story on a good premise that I enjoyed.

1/10/22, 10:22 PM
@Josh Slater Thanks very much! I haven't read this story in a good long time. It was one of those "I've got a concept that I'm gonna flesh out" things for me. I'm glad it works for you.
Anonymous
1/10/22, 9:37 PM
Really like where this story is going! Great chapter!
1/10/22, 8:35 PM
I would also love to see a follow up to where they are afterwards!
screamingmoist
1/10/22, 7:37 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone! I fully intended to go the traditional route with the boss being changed, but once I started writing it felt better to go in the direction that it did.
Anonymous
1/10/22, 7:16 PM
Hot and sexy -- I want to be one of those boys
1/10/22, 5:39 PM
very sexy
Elm
1/10/22, 4:43 PM
Another excellent addition to this great story! i finna have the time
1/10/22, 7:33 AM
REALLY glad you're back!

1/10/22, 7:49 AM
Thanks, @daemon - it's good to be back.

1/10/22, 8:57 AM
@daemon so am I!

Daemon
1/10/22, 10:22 AM
Mr Hardy is returning, yes? (pleading please). Can't wait for more of his repressed as fuck shenanigans, good and drunk and totally out of it. Gosh indeed.
Anonymous
1/10/22, 8:39 AM
had to cum twice to this story after cumming halfway
1/10/22, 7:49 AM
Love this chapter and what changes Orin is going through. Thankyou so much for adding to Noams original story.