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1/10/22, 10:55 PM
I loved every second reading this. It must have taken a fair few hours. Well crafted and a tale which kept me coming back for more. Thanks for working hard to bring us such a well written, different story
1/10/22, 10:38 PM
Getting the cock of a pornstar is an interesting concept, but I would have preferred the transformation to stop there. It could have played out in the text in such a way that you wouldn't be quite sure if the cock had transformed or not until the end when he ejaculates through what was once just rubber.
1/10/22, 6:20 PM
This was a fascinating premise! I found myself wishing for a longer, hornier and more degrading sex scene between them - which is very much new for me! Well done, dude!

1/10/22, 10:23 PM
@Dace I agree with you 100% -- I let him off too easy in the sex scene. I'm just not into humiliation myself, so I never know where that line is.
1/5/22, 8:46 PM
The buildup throughout the story, first slowly revealing something is off ("They saw to that"), and then handing out clues about what that might be, makes a great parallel story that unfolds behind the main story. The wording threw me off and made me think of some group like a science experiment, the military, or an agency. I felt he perhaps swung from reserved to exposing himself a bit abruptly. He could easily have reasoned something like "I'm not gonna see these fuckers again, so I don't care." The post-transformation exposé is perhaps a bit overly detailed for something in that moment. I also would have loved the "Not anymore" to be cut and be implied. This is probably just a fixation of mine, but since almost nothing fits anymore and Tanner has seen this already several times, he could toss Richard some immediate tips. "With such a body no one is going to stop you entering a sports goods store. Take flip flops, cut the sides off a T-shirt, and wear your basket shorts as hot pants." Overall a well crafted story on a good premise that I enjoyed.

1/10/22, 10:22 PM
@Josh Slater Thanks very much! I haven't read this story in a good long time. It was one of those "I've got a concept that I'm gonna flesh out" things for me. I'm glad it works for you.
Anonymous
1/10/22, 9:37 PM
Really like where this story is going! Great chapter!
1/10/22, 8:35 PM
I would also love to see a follow up to where they are afterwards!
screamingmoist
1/10/22, 7:37 PM
Thanks for the feedback everyone! I fully intended to go the traditional route with the boss being changed, but once I started writing it felt better to go in the direction that it did.
Anonymous
1/10/22, 7:16 PM
Hot and sexy -- I want to be one of those boys
1/10/22, 5:39 PM
very sexy
Elm
1/10/22, 4:43 PM
Another excellent addition to this great story! i finna have the time