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1/10/22, 2:40 AM
This was a hot story. I do have a word of caution for you going forward, having read many drone stories and seeing some of the common pitfalls. Please be cautious with the alpha-numeric codes in place of names. These are *not* anywhere near as easy to follow as a regular name, and writing a typical scene where you differentiate characters only by drone numbers will make your story nearly unreadable. Simply treating the boys as a group as you mostly did here is an acceptable work around. Just don't fall into the trap of thinking that CT-X10, CT-A13, and CT-B09 will work anything like Jeff, Steve, and Ralph for purposes of readers being able to follow a narrative. They absolutely don't.

Rub.berized
1/10/22, 6:55 AM
@amul that's a really helpful advice. For now, I'll be introducing a few of the boys one by one so that it should be fine. But it's true, that this might be confusing and I need to be more cautious. Thank you for the comment.
1/10/22, 5:11 AM
You top yourself with every story, making them hotter and hotter each time. This episode in particular was flawless, seeing Peter just descending more and more into mindless lust. Just perfect. You made a fan out of me and I've been reading and re-reading everything. Keep sharing, you got us hooked!

1/10/22, 5:25 AM
@Essex thanks man! So cool to hear!
11/24/21, 11:30 PM
An incredibly hot follow up. Surprised by the addition of the big bro and Daddy, but the bisexual side of the Daddy having a relationship with both parents throws me off as I see no reason then to not just keep the wife too. Sort of makes the conflict forced or his mother just a weird part of the story.

11/25/21, 12:01 AM
@Essex Thanks for sharing your thoughts! The central issue is that she doesn't get on with the boy and wants Frank to leave the neighborhood, not the fact she's a woman.

11/25/21, 12:04 AM
Or, more accurately, the point is that a bisexual throuple could and should work in-universe, but doesn't with Frank, Kathleen, and Sam, because of Kathleen.

1/10/22, 5:13 AM
@Norismo Having revisited the story and having read the ending, I get it now. Thanks for a brilliant and super hot story.
Anonymous
1/10/22, 4:49 AM
Looking forward to the next part of this story!
1/10/22, 4:43 AM
this story is so fucking hot!! please continue it!!
Willie Cici
1/10/22, 4:18 AM
As always, excellent!!
Jan 7, 2022
toy #4
1/10/22, 4:14 AM
Welcome back. it has missed you the two years you have been gone from this site. Since you will not be continuing this story, perhaps you can be pollinated with ideas on what to write next.
1/10/22, 2:19 AM
i would love to see a sequel and slowly show Tom slow become gay while hating every second of
12/27/21, 4:35 PM
omg i need more of this story

1/10/22, 1:46 AM
@Hypnocurious Ask and ye shall receive ;)
Whitewolf78
12/21/21, 2:51 PM
hot hot hot!!!

1/10/22, 1:46 AM
@Whitewolf78 Thanks!