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1/9/22, 8:49 PM
keep it up! i would a follow up about the boys in the country!
1/9/22, 8:36 PM
Oh wow. Hot brainy boys -- transformed into hot mindless hypno-sluts! This is really, really well done. Jerome and Michel's slippage into the Professor's spiral is awesomely insidious. When Jerome declares, "“I don’t read books. They’re full of unsexy words that just make my head hurt...", that nearly brought me over the edge! Please, enroll me in Reynard's class, and tell me what I need to do to get invited to the chateau!
Anonymous
1/9/22, 6:07 PM
I really like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.... What happens next?

SC Walker
1/9/22, 7:25 PM
I'm rebooting the series, with the first chapter already up on my Patreon. I'll rewrite this chapter and then continue it from there. @
1/9/22, 1:30 PM
Damn!! So excited for the king's turn!

1/9/22, 1:33 PM
Glad you enjoy. I'm going to start the next chapter shortly. 😄@moolah

Anonymous
1/9/22, 3:32 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter. It will be the King's turn. Let's regression him.@ArdanWolfe

1/9/22, 7:23 PM
The king will definitely be getting a unique treatment 😄. I'll be working on that chapter soon.@Anonymous
1/9/22, 6:57 PM
Good hot story. Looking forward to reading more.

Rub.berized
1/9/22, 7:04 PM
@PupScout you'll definitely read more soon I hope 😍
1/9/22, 6:10 PM
It's an interesting start, but I hope you'll continue to use the flashback method to flesh out the backstories of at least a couple of the men on the bus. If the end goal is to have them lose their identity and become part of a drone collective, then we need to see who these men were as individuals before they became droned.

Rub.berized
1/9/22, 6:27 PM
@Hypnothrill I 100% agree. I'm not yet sure whether I have only smaller paragraphs, entire parts or bonus chapters to talk more about them. For the first part I want them to be seen as a group without much of a character. But I also want to know more about them and I think I'll try a few things out.
1/9/22, 5:28 PM
This may be my new favorite story from you. Great work.
1/9/22, 5:00 PM
Yes, yes, yes! Another gem. Please do give us the epilogue.
1/9/22, 4:44 PM
TRÈS MANIFIQUE! Hypnothrill, you've done it again. What an incredibly hot story! And the pictures are perfect, too. Hail to the King!
naturallyInconsistent
1/9/22, 4:37 PM
It is rather awkward that you referred to Dr Conrad even though he is technically never supposed to have been on the bus ever. Yes, he designed and anticipated the bus trip, but it is still jarring as is. These young men are so suggestible even before the Program starts. I cant wait to read more! Hot!!

Yourguy92
1/9/22, 4:39 PM
@naturallyInconsistent I see the point and will edit that. Because, I wasn't sure myself.