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Nov 26, 2020
1/9/22, 10:55 PM
I've been hoping for a continuation. There are so many battles and conflicts to take from the Edda. You could be the Gay Snorri!
1/9/22, 10:47 PM
Nice one. I await the next chapters.
1/9/22, 6:33 PM
There's a sweetness and innocence in this story. I hope you have many more chapters!

1/9/22, 10:45 PM
@Stroppy Author Thank you, Bro. Same here.
1/9/22, 8:49 PM
keep it up! i would a follow up about the boys in the country!
1/9/22, 8:36 PM
Oh wow. Hot brainy boys -- transformed into hot mindless hypno-sluts! This is really, really well done. Jerome and Michel's slippage into the Professor's spiral is awesomely insidious. When Jerome declares, "โ€œI donโ€™t read books. Theyโ€™re full of unsexy words that just make my head hurt...", that nearly brought me over the edge! Please, enroll me in Reynard's class, and tell me what I need to do to get invited to the chateau!
Anonymous
1/9/22, 6:07 PM
I really like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.... What happens next?

SC Walker
1/9/22, 7:25 PM
I'm rebooting the series, with the first chapter already up on my Patreon. I'll rewrite this chapter and then continue it from there. @
1/9/22, 1:30 PM
Damn!! So excited for the king's turn!

1/9/22, 1:33 PM
Glad you enjoy. I'm going to start the next chapter shortly. ๐Ÿ˜„@moolah

Anonymous
1/9/22, 3:32 PM
I can't wait for the next chapter. It will be the King's turn. Let's regression him.@ArdanWolfe

1/9/22, 7:23 PM
The king will definitely be getting a unique treatment ๐Ÿ˜„. I'll be working on that chapter soon.@Anonymous
1/9/22, 6:57 PM
Good hot story. Looking forward to reading more.

Rub.berized
1/9/22, 7:04 PM
@PupScout you'll definitely read more soon I hope ๐Ÿ˜
1/9/22, 6:10 PM
It's an interesting start, but I hope you'll continue to use the flashback method to flesh out the backstories of at least a couple of the men on the bus. If the end goal is to have them lose their identity and become part of a drone collective, then we need to see who these men were as individuals before they became droned.

Rub.berized
1/9/22, 6:27 PM
@Hypnothrill I 100% agree. I'm not yet sure whether I have only smaller paragraphs, entire parts or bonus chapters to talk more about them. For the first part I want them to be seen as a group without much of a character. But I also want to know more about them and I think I'll try a few things out.
1/9/22, 5:28 PM
This may be my new favorite story from you. Great work.