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1/9/22, 6:54 AM
Glad I came across this one. Nice discriptions and over all I like this kind of story.
1/8/22, 10:34 PM
That was smoking hot!

1/9/22, 6:18 AM
@stimle thanks bud!
1/9/22, 4:02 AM
This was really hot (very unsurprisingly), but what was surprising was that the ending was just a lot less dark than I anticipated. A sexy story with loads of menace and a sort of wholesome ending.
Anonymous
1/9/22, 3:14 AM
Cant wait for next chapter!
1/9/22, 2:00 AM
Unf. This was such a hot story.
1/9/22, 1:01 AM
Oh, wow. This is *hot*!
1/8/22, 11:10 PM
Just came to this for like the sixth time. Fantastic story! Workouts, gym, muscle admiration/worshipfulness, pits, sweat, straight to gay... That's a lot of my biggest buttons in there! Thank you. Unlike a few commenters, and despite how much I love this, I'm perfectly happy without another chapter. It ended right where it should have, masterfully.
1/8/22, 10:42 PM
Also not a fan of Nikes, but I definitely appreciate a sweaty sneaker! It's great to see a story like this that combines the two kinks. I always appreciate a gradual transformation, and a story that lets us follow the subject's reactions and thoughts as it happens. Thanks for the story, it got me off twice so far!
1/8/22, 10:08 PM
Your characterization of Brandon in this story is so excellent and the care and attention you gave to it really pays off! I also love the quietly sinister power of the Code Breaker -- knowing what total control they had and how they demonstrated it was intimidatingly erotic. Excellent story!
1/8/22, 8:34 PM
Interesting beggining, but very hot premise (the Normal/sub societal dynamic). Also… not to be a party pooper, but I have some issues with "clean" being used in a casual way to refer to not having an STI. I'm okay with it in a degrading/humiliating setting, but I don't think this was the case. Used casually, I think it just reinforces serophobia. Anyway, it's just my humble one cent in that subject :)

1/8/22, 9:17 PM
@topdog Thank you for your comment and for pointing that out about the stigma and issues surrounding serophobia. It didn't cross my mind, but I can absolutely see it now, I agree 100% as it being an offensive off-hand comment. I have edited it now to remove that line. Thanks again, I appreciate this; it's always good to educate more about these things. :)