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1/9/22, 4:02 AM
This was really hot (very unsurprisingly), but what was surprising was that the ending was just a lot less dark than I anticipated. A sexy story with loads of menace and a sort of wholesome ending.
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1/9/22, 3:14 AM
Cant wait for next chapter!
1/9/22, 2:00 AM
Unf. This was such a hot story.
1/9/22, 1:01 AM
Oh, wow. This is *hot*!
1/8/22, 11:10 PM
Just came to this for like the sixth time. Fantastic story! Workouts, gym, muscle admiration/worshipfulness, pits, sweat, straight to gay... That's a lot of my biggest buttons in there! Thank you. Unlike a few commenters, and despite how much I love this, I'm perfectly happy without another chapter. It ended right where it should have, masterfully.
1/8/22, 10:42 PM
Also not a fan of Nikes, but I definitely appreciate a sweaty sneaker! It's great to see a story like this that combines the two kinks. I always appreciate a gradual transformation, and a story that lets us follow the subject's reactions and thoughts as it happens. Thanks for the story, it got me off twice so far!
1/8/22, 10:08 PM
Your characterization of Brandon in this story is so excellent and the care and attention you gave to it really pays off! I also love the quietly sinister power of the Code Breaker -- knowing what total control they had and how they demonstrated it was intimidatingly erotic. Excellent story!
1/8/22, 8:34 PM
Interesting beggining, but very hot premise (the Normal/sub societal dynamic). Also… not to be a party pooper, but I have some issues with "clean" being used in a casual way to refer to not having an STI. I'm okay with it in a degrading/humiliating setting, but I don't think this was the case. Used casually, I think it just reinforces serophobia. Anyway, it's just my humble one cent in that subject :)

1/8/22, 9:17 PM
@topdog Thank you for your comment and for pointing that out about the stigma and issues surrounding serophobia. It didn't cross my mind, but I can absolutely see it now, I agree 100% as it being an offensive off-hand comment. I have edited it now to remove that line. Thanks again, I appreciate this; it's always good to educate more about these things. :)
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 8:53 PM
@Hypnothrill you say that you only write nefarious stories. But there is a way around that regarding Tabula Rasa. While I said the organization has only the best intentions, that doesn't mean that the simulation is as well. Think of it this way, the business is designed to make its clients happy and content. If will satisfy you innermost desires. So you can create simulations that cater to the specific desires of each men. What if a client wants a really pervy, mind fuck of a scenario. Maybe you can have twist built upon twists that make it hard for the client (and the reader) to know exactly what's going on. A client can experience a truly sinister simulation, and upon disconnecting from it, has no idea what he just went through. You emerge as a blank slate, feeling a full euphoria and ultimately fulfilled. It's as if waking from the best dream, but not really knowing why you feel so great. As far as Tabula Rasa goes, their main goal is to make money. To make money, they need clients. And to get clients, they have created a niche market, with virtually no competitors. So it's quite easy for them. Satisfy the client by giving them exactly what they want (which is happiness), and the money will flow.
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 5:08 PM
TexMuscle ... those are all good questions. And unfortunately, it's hard to answer them within the story. If I try to, the story gets bogged down with exposition. And that will grind the narrative to a halt. I wanted to imply that there's really nothing sinister about this organization. It's simply a business that improves a man's living. It's probably a very expensive business to frequent, but if it makes you happy and betters your life, how much money would you pay? As for the decontamination suits. I tried to imagine that each individual is lacking specific nutrients, vitamins or chemicals in their bodies. Some men may require a higher testosterone level, while others don't. So as you enter your specific induction chamber, each man is flooded with a chemically and nutrient rich solution that is catered to their specific needs. If the technicians were exposed to these solutions, as it wasn't designed for them, it could be harmful to their bodies. Hope that makes sense. Tabula Rasa is also a gym in a way. We don't haven't seen what's outside the locker room. And I do invite writers to explore this if they want to write a chapter. (I'm looking at you Hypnothrill) There really could be a normal gym. I go to a gym, and it offers many services. They have massage chairs, tanning booths, and other amenities that you have to pay extra for. I see Tabula Rasa as a male improvement center. And perhaps the Induction Chambers are just services that you have to pay a higher fee for. In Cody's case, this was his second visit. And the first few times, the client's mind resists. It's just the subconscious mind resisting. It's not nefarious. I kinda borrowed this from "Inception" in which the mind seems to sense an intruder and defends itself almost like an immune system. You just have to find ways to trick the unconscious mind. And that's what was happening here.

1/8/22, 6:15 PM
@rubbrsome I only write nefarious stories LOL! Sorry you're not continuing this, but I hope it's just the first of many new stories from you in the new year.