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Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 3:07 PM
Welcome back. Thanks for the new story. So many questions come to mind. Why the need for the decontamination suits? The process alters the men's minds does it alter their bodies as well? They go to gym expecting results in muscle development. It sounds like they are being trained for a greater purpose. Looking forward to the next installment.
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 3:05 PM
Thanks for all the positive feedback regarding this story, and welcoming me back. Ooof ... maybe I shouldn't have been so quick to publish this story. It probably could've used another round of editing. My goal was to make this story jarring to the reader when it transitioned from the simulation to the technician's perspective. And unlike my other stories, there's no world domination plot or sinister motives. This is simply a business in which that is designed to better men's bodies and minds. It would be a business that I would gladly and willingly frequent. Unfortunately, it's not a story that I have further chapters to explore. However, if other writers want to have a crack at it, I say go for it. Maybe there's other methods in which Tabula Rasa offer there services. Maybe there's a "home delivery" option because of the pandemic. Maybe there's a group discount when there's large events or parties. Maybe they have to think outside the box when a particular client is having trouble in their induction. If anyone wants to add a chapter, you're more than welcome. I just ask that you keep the true intentions of Tabula Rasa pure and noble. It was designed to promote the betterment of mankind. I've written plenty of sinister organization; I'd like to keep one virtuous.
7/15/21, 4:34 AM
If this is a first attempt at a story, I'm astounded. I hope you have many more "attempts" in mind, because I already wish I could be part of this family.

7/15/21, 7:15 PM
What Deej said!!! ^^^

MuscleCub
7/15/21, 7:56 PM
I am absolutely humbled @Deej when I see comments like this. Thank you so much!

1/8/22, 2:40 PM
I agree whole heartedly with @Deej
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 10:03 AM
welcome back. missed your great tales of technology, rubber and control.
Dec 20, 2021
1/8/22, 9:34 AM
Hot, super clever, big musky boys go brrrr
1/8/22, 9:30 AM
very hot! i love the concept of magic users that are used to being in control having it used against them.
Martin
1/8/22, 8:56 AM
I can only agree with anonusr, I really enjoyed this chapter. This scenario is very much in line with my favorite personal fantasies. Please write more about this!
Jan 7, 2022
Ng5
1/8/22, 6:18 AM
This was a very wonderful story. I hope there is more. Only thing I would add is a line breaker in the middle to help with the transition from the simulation to the men outside the tank.
Dec 29, 2021
1/8/22, 6:01 AM
This was lovely! Exactly what I was looking for. Would love to see more of these two, especially if that meant Robert got a bit more independence, but even without that I'm sure it'd b hot as hell. Thanks for sharing!!
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 5:50 AM
Welcome back! So good to see you again here. Loving the story so far. Can't wait see see what's next.