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Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 10:03 AM
welcome back. missed your great tales of technology, rubber and control.
Dec 20, 2021
1/8/22, 9:34 AM
Hot, super clever, big musky boys go brrrr
1/8/22, 9:30 AM
very hot! i love the concept of magic users that are used to being in control having it used against them.
Martin
1/8/22, 8:56 AM
I can only agree with anonusr, I really enjoyed this chapter. This scenario is very much in line with my favorite personal fantasies. Please write more about this!
Jan 7, 2022
Ng5
1/8/22, 6:18 AM
This was a very wonderful story. I hope there is more. Only thing I would add is a line breaker in the middle to help with the transition from the simulation to the men outside the tank.
Dec 29, 2021
1/8/22, 6:01 AM
This was lovely! Exactly what I was looking for. Would love to see more of these two, especially if that meant Robert got a bit more independence, but even without that I'm sure it'd b hot as hell. Thanks for sharing!!
Jan 7, 2022
1/8/22, 5:50 AM
Welcome back! So good to see you again here. Loving the story so far. Can't wait see see what's next.
1/8/22, 4:46 AM
I've been eagerly awaiting this update, and it didn't disappoint! Definitely enjoying the slow, methodical way that the baron is breaking both Tim and Finn down. And I absolutely loved the way Finn had a post-hypnotic suggestion to enthrall Timothy. The way Tim also described thoughts being driven from his head was also nicely done. I do hope we'll get to explore a bit more of this world you've created in the next chapter. I really loved how the first chapter drew you in to the period setting and the metal shop, and part of me would love to walk around the grounds of this estate and see how he's handling his toys within the setting you've established (and how all the other hypnotized lads interact with Finn and Tim). That said, I'm also eagerly looking forward to more of Tim and Finn's training! Regardless, excellent work!
gdlosh13@gmail.com
1/8/22, 3:43 AM
Can't believe I enjoyed this but did.
Jan 7, 2022
Willie Cici
1/8/22, 3:35 AM
I had to read this twice because I was afraid I missed something. This was great. I always enjoyed reading your entries. I could see this as a series. Can't wait to see where you take this.