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Jan 7, 2022
Willie Cici
1/8/22, 3:35 AM
I had to read this twice because I was afraid I missed something. This was great. I always enjoyed reading your entries. I could see this as a series. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Jan 6, 2022
Anonymous
1/8/22, 3:28 AM
Keep writing, Willie. Loved this short story!!!
1/8/22, 3:19 AM
Lol I love this story I can't wait to see how small our boy gets.
1/7/22, 9:26 AM
I think you got my tags! Quite the fun story, I liked the diagram of the house being the hypnotic device.

1/8/22, 3:01 AM
@Norismo If thats the case, Im glad you liked it!
Aug 25, 2020
1/8/22, 2:08 AM
How do i get sent they? When you said that "Most all the guards and technicians have been through it, the process." I Take a job as a technician. The process makes us, no able to talk about work, out side of work. Great job, I keep looking for more parts. Thank you
1/7/22, 11:53 PM
Absolutely amazing! Loved the use of language to create the sense of a historical tale passed on by word of mouth. The hot sex was a terrific bonus. Bravo!
1/7/22, 11:28 PM
Good story but at the start "He gently pulls the foreskin back on my cock" and later "my cock, which had been circumcised before" - continuity errors. ;)

1/7/22, 11:52 PM
@Mannah you're right. I wish I could say it was some sort of subtle change that he hadn't noticed, but it was all my mistake. I'll have to fix that :)
Jan 7, 2022
Martin
1/7/22, 10:47 PM
Rubbrsome! You're back! Please tell me that this is just the start of one of your amazing series!
Jan 7, 2022
1/7/22, 8:07 PM
Welcome Back!!! Great story with a bit of Matrix feel to it. I like it and look forward to reading more of your stories!!
1/7/22, 6:19 PM
fuck cant wait to see where this goes