Recent Comments

Jan 7, 2022
1/7/22, 8:07 PM
Welcome Back!!! Great story with a bit of Matrix feel to it. I like it and look forward to reading more of your stories!!
1/7/22, 6:19 PM
fuck cant wait to see where this goes
1/7/22, 5:24 PM
Yes! Yes! A wonderful continuation. I love it. I'm so curious where this will all go.
Bleh
1/7/22, 5:03 PM
i like how this story has gone from Charles messing with Ben Dover to Russell being a baby
1/5/22, 9:47 PM
I'm not exactly sure why, but i really like this story. Its funny and sweet and clever. Looking forward to more... LLOYD

1/7/22, 3:32 PM
@Lloyd311 Thank you buddy. Poor Eddy and Yarif may have a bumpy ride ahead of them! More coming.
Jan 7, 2022
1/7/22, 3:28 PM
Wow! You really know how to grab my attention! You started us right in the middle of the action, then threw in a great twist. I'm definitely hooked, and I hope you post more chapters soon!
Jan 7, 2022
1/7/22, 2:35 PM
I was excited to see your name again, and I am hoping to see more of you this year! This one does not disappoint at all.
Jan 7, 2022
1/7/22, 2:29 PM
What an interesting idea, hope there's more to come!
1/7/22, 1:45 PM
First please continue the story! I agree with all previous comments! They summed it up nicely! Keep writing & lots more details, slow it down,your words need to draw pictures for us readers to be able to visualize! Great plot & interesting idea! Enjoy your story telling! It's not a race to the finish line! S l o o ow d o w n to savor the information you are telling. Need Interesting Details Explained Well ! Remember we are on this journey with you! See it in your mind, Think it out, Begin writing! proofread ! These computers tend to change our words A lot! Voila, We have a wonderful piece of art ! Thank You !
Blakenikolas
1/7/22, 12:18 PM
hotter and hotter keep going