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1/6/22, 10:55 PM
I'll be doing something different with Larry, never fear. But that doesn't mean that Brandon and Dylan won't be making some other mistakes in the future because of overconfidence. :)
1/6/22, 10:26 PM
You're doing very well, but that ending with Larry makes it seem like its going to be the same situation as before. It would be nice to see that Brandon and Dylan put some safeguards in place preventing someone new like Larry taking control of them and Eric.
1/6/22, 10:06 PM
Love this! a great historical, almost mythic tone to it and a happy ending indeed!
1/6/22, 9:50 PM
Elegant, hot, and smoothly sits into the setting in a way that's quite arousing! Well done!
Dec 18, 2021
Martin
1/6/22, 9:32 PM
I love such a positive and hot story. The sex scene was written perfectly. And the story was so cute and wholesome. The only regret is that we never learned how this pup got enrolled. There's a hot story left to be told there!
1/6/22, 3:59 PM
I can't help but feel that some of the language in this story is transphobic, especially the word "she-male." That's a REALLY outdated term, and the people I know in the trans community consider it a slur. For most of the narrative, Tracy is referred to as just plain female (because she is--trans women don't need to get surgery to be women), so to have her suddenly referred to in that way undercuts the whole narrative. Plus when her cock is revealed, the narration suddenly starts using male pronouns for her ("had long stymied HIS procreative ability..."), which is also a problem. There's a bigger conversation to be had over the fact that the villain of the story is a trans woman (a very problematic trope going back to "Sleepaway Camp," but at the same time, making trans characters paragons of virtue is also troublesome...), but it's the transphobic terms used by the narration that cause the most distress. Thanks for reading my input.

1/6/22, 6:57 PM
@Feed Your Head I can't speak to any of that, but I do think that this scene warranted a tag.

1/6/22, 9:19 PM
@Feed Your Head +1 to everything you said here. On the whole
Martin
1/6/22, 9:14 PM
Very dark, indeed, but it still made me hard and excited!
1/6/22, 9:04 PM
Cute and sexy and hot. Nice work!
1/6/22, 8:37 PM
This story line is just amazing! Takes me back to original Cycle One story by Absman. The stories set in gyms are just incredible and I am super excited to see more and more chapters! How will Brians dad feature in the story moving forward? What about Troys superiors at work and will more be brought into the Empire? Will we get to see Troy and others being served by their clients? ,
1/6/22, 7:51 PM
I really liked this chapter ! Thank you ! I am ready to join the Empire !