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1/4/22, 7:33 AM
Excellent first person story. The way you walk though the thought process of the main character was very believable. The bratty push back he would consistently attempt as well as the initial concern for his safety in the beginning made him more realistic than someone more passive. It also made the turn of his submission that much hotter.

1/4/22, 11:49 PM
Thank you! 1st person is hard to get right so I appreciate the praise. I like that people are noticing and appreciating the bratty pushback. I didn't plan for it but it came out as I was writing. @ThisisDiz
1/4/22, 11:36 PM
This is off to such a promising start for Conner! I love that guy, but seeing him get banged up a little in your story is so hot. I can't wait for the next chapters

1/4/22, 11:39 PM
@Some Guy thanks man, super nice to hear!
Adonis
1/4/22, 9:36 PM
Hey all! I tried to make a bit of an embarrassing/tense scene, since that's mostly what this site is about. I'm really bad when it comes to embarrassing moments, and it'll likely show in my work. If anyone has any ideas about future scenes, do let me know. I'll try to work it in with what I've already written. Also! You guys know what items Xander has. Try to guess what their function is, and how he'll use them in the future!
1/4/22, 8:26 PM
fuckin hot story. very convinced written. kept cummin and being horny
Martin
1/4/22, 7:15 PM
The tags are all off. Please use proper tags. It's either 1st, 2nd OR 3rd person. In your case it's 3rd person: "he did that... he did this"... Please find proper tags to describe what this story is about. Thx.
1/4/22, 5:38 PM
SOOOO HOTTT!!!
Anonymous
1/4/22, 4:09 PM
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Put the brothers to love each other is very hot. Maybe you can change their father into younger/teen again, brainwashed him and let them make love. It will be hot!!!

1/4/22, 4:45 PM
Glad you enjoyed 😊. The next chapter is in the works. And I'm trying to figure out exactly what to do with the father.....not sure if he and Benton will rule as husband's or maybe look at making the current king a son as well so Benton rules as the sole king?
Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
1/4/22, 4:31 PM
Such a hot tale. I hope we get part 2 soon!
ravewizer
8/25/17, 9:19 PM
Thank you for the support! I reread the story and corrected some typos that slipped passed my proofreading . :) I am happy you enjoyed the story, there are more parts to come soon enough.

1/4/22, 4:04 PM
@ravewizer Really hoping you can continue this.
Anonymous
1/4/22, 3:33 PM
Such a great series! I wonder if there's going to be a slower installment with less sexual stuff and more of psychologic buildup, perhaps an office day - or some more variations of how to use Top View (like just the sides), how coworkers have used it in small ways and how it affected them just a bit.. and then more on others. So that the protagonist sees what's going on with them (without applying it to himself)..? just a thought. Great series and imagine all the 'skin fades' that can be kept smooth like this ;)!