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1/4/22, 5:14 PM
look forward to more of this when it is ready

Jes
1/5/22, 1:48 AM
Loved your comment!
Anonymous
1/4/22, 3:37 PM
Nice setup - just very fast, especially in the end. Would be even better with more detail IMO but great work!

1/5/22, 1:48 AM
Thanks so much!
1/5/22, 12:21 AM
Well, I see the company's agenda is unambiguous--i wonder if they will get more involved in this plot
offeringservice26
1/3/22, 7:36 PM
I LOVED this! Just discovered some new fetishes I didn't know I had!

1/4/22, 11:49 PM
It's always a goal to infect people with new fetishes lol ;) @offeringservice26
1/4/22, 7:33 AM
Excellent first person story. The way you walk though the thought process of the main character was very believable. The bratty push back he would consistently attempt as well as the initial concern for his safety in the beginning made him more realistic than someone more passive. It also made the turn of his submission that much hotter.

1/4/22, 11:49 PM
Thank you! 1st person is hard to get right so I appreciate the praise. I like that people are noticing and appreciating the bratty pushback. I didn't plan for it but it came out as I was writing. @ThisisDiz
1/4/22, 11:36 PM
This is off to such a promising start for Conner! I love that guy, but seeing him get banged up a little in your story is so hot. I can't wait for the next chapters

1/4/22, 11:39 PM
@Some Guy thanks man, super nice to hear!
Adonis
1/4/22, 9:36 PM
Hey all! I tried to make a bit of an embarrassing/tense scene, since that's mostly what this site is about. I'm really bad when it comes to embarrassing moments, and it'll likely show in my work. If anyone has any ideas about future scenes, do let me know. I'll try to work it in with what I've already written. Also! You guys know what items Xander has. Try to guess what their function is, and how he'll use them in the future!
1/4/22, 8:26 PM
fuckin hot story. very convinced written. kept cummin and being horny
Martin
1/4/22, 7:15 PM
The tags are all off. Please use proper tags. It's either 1st, 2nd OR 3rd person. In your case it's 3rd person: "he did that... he did this"... Please find proper tags to describe what this story is about. Thx.
1/4/22, 5:38 PM
SOOOO HOTTT!!!