Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/4/22, 4:09 PM
I can't wait to read the next chapter. Put the brothers to love each other is very hot. Maybe you can change their father into younger/teen again, brainwashed him and let them make love. It will be hot!!!

1/4/22, 4:45 PM
Glad you enjoyed 😊. The next chapter is in the works. And I'm trying to figure out exactly what to do with the father.....not sure if he and Benton will rule as husband's or maybe look at making the current king a son as well so Benton rules as the sole king?
Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
1/4/22, 4:31 PM
Such a hot tale. I hope we get part 2 soon!
ravewizer
8/25/17, 9:19 PM
Thank you for the support! I reread the story and corrected some typos that slipped passed my proofreading . :) I am happy you enjoyed the story, there are more parts to come soon enough.

1/4/22, 4:04 PM
@ravewizer Really hoping you can continue this.
Anonymous
1/4/22, 3:33 PM
Such a great series! I wonder if there's going to be a slower installment with less sexual stuff and more of psychologic buildup, perhaps an office day - or some more variations of how to use Top View (like just the sides), how coworkers have used it in small ways and how it affected them just a bit.. and then more on others. So that the protagonist sees what's going on with them (without applying it to himself)..? just a thought. Great series and imagine all the 'skin fades' that can be kept smooth like this ;)!
1/4/22, 2:55 PM
Always must reads. So great!
1/4/22, 2:29 PM
Nice. Some minor typos but didn't detract. Looking forward to more.
1/4/22, 11:56 AM
If this phrase resonates with you... "the smell of guys leather boots old clothes damp clothes so erotic" then you need to get familiar with the works of Blufman who strikes a primitive chord in a mangled syntax way. That may be why it rings so true for me, and maybe you.
1/4/22, 6:12 AM
Applause. Always applause
1/4/22, 5:11 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! Looking forward to future chapters.
1/4/22, 4:59 AM
The intersection of characters and story and fates. Like a gayer frank Miller tale or something Favorite were cops and jail and figures and tension there but all given distinct feel and voice Pigtown as..forget it Jake it's Chinatown sort of drama is surprisingly nice Love the depiction of the flesh and identity messing power and how makes him alike but different from the other specially gifted pigtownies Almost implying his power was his own not granted or grafted Ditto examining how pigtown now a complex interwoven growing system Seriously wish some poor sap would illustrate this with all the scenery movement surrealism and see But like no circulation potential so anyone decent turning thus into a graphic novel cost more than you likely make camming and and never make back from customers Still to me best pigtown as not just nasty but heartfelt either some more appealing elements 9/10 story.