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1/4/22, 5:11 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! Looking forward to future chapters.
1/4/22, 4:59 AM
The intersection of characters and story and fates. Like a gayer frank Miller tale or something Favorite were cops and jail and figures and tension there but all given distinct feel and voice Pigtown as..forget it Jake it's Chinatown sort of drama is surprisingly nice Love the depiction of the flesh and identity messing power and how makes him alike but different from the other specially gifted pigtownies Almost implying his power was his own not granted or grafted Ditto examining how pigtown now a complex interwoven growing system Seriously wish some poor sap would illustrate this with all the scenery movement surrealism and see But like no circulation potential so anyone decent turning thus into a graphic novel cost more than you likely make camming and and never make back from customers Still to me best pigtown as not just nasty but heartfelt either some more appealing elements 9/10 story.
Anonymous
1/4/22, 3:44 AM
I'm curious as to what your gonna do with Bud.

1/4/22, 4:42 AM
Bud will be coming, but later. We'll be dealing with Eric, Brandon, and Dylan for a while. And then, Larry who has ideas of his own about the Dares.
1/4/22, 4:42 AM
Also, I'm a super fan of the exhibitionism and the jocks being oblivious/innocent to how lewd and slutty they are being. Keep this up!
1/4/22, 4:41 AM
Another great, super hot chapter. Can't wait to see the game putting Xander in more tricky, sexy situations with other hot hung jocks!
1/1/22, 6:09 AM
Very good story, but I'm a sucker for manipulative, dominant Bottoms… I guess I'm biased!

1/1/22, 4:28 PM
@topdog Haha, fair enough. Sounds like you'd be interested in seeing how Rami became some manipulative. ;)

1/3/22, 7:36 PM
No doubt about it, @DownWriteNasty. Will there be a continuation?

1/4/22, 2:10 AM
@topdog Im thinking about it...!
Anonymous
1/3/22, 11:08 AM
This is a really hot story, I love "daddification" and seeing a guy (whether sub/dom/top/bottom) creating his own daddy!

1/4/22, 2:10 AM
Awesome! Thank you for the feedback!
1/3/22, 11:50 PM
so excited to see another installment of this series! excellent work as always :)
easdf
1/2/22, 11:43 PM
Now this is a twist I did not expect. It's strange because until now it had seemed that the barber shop had aimed to please each customer's own desires while at the same time leading them to the happy ending. In this chapter it seems that the barber shop had decided to take Emery as its project while being a bit hostile towards Orrin. Then again I don't want to misinterpret and take the mood out. Having said that, I am really intrigued to see the result and Orrin's reaction to the new him and the new Emery (which with his new dom vibe it's bound to be hot as fuck). Can't wait for the next episode!

1/2/22, 11:54 PM
@easdf I had nothing to do with these sequels beyond rubber-stamping their publication as the series owner, so this is just my guess, but: I read the Voice as being an entirely different one from the original I wrote. To me, this one has a peppy, almost Jonathan Van Ness vibe, vs the Laurence Fishburne iteration. My personal guess/headcanon at this point is that there are any number of spirits, each with their own barbershops. #worldbuilding :D

1/3/22, 1:13 AM
@easdf As the original author astutely picked up on, my intention was that this voice (and shop) are different from those in the original story. My intent wasn't to exactly replicate the original voice but to create a new one with its own quirks and idiosyncrasies (among other differences, Noam's voice uses "I" to refer to itself while mine uses "we") Regarding Orrin, without giving too much away I thought I'd toy around with the idea of him being brought into the shop not as much for his own sake but rather to be part of the fulfillment of Emery's wish. Notice how as soon as Emery so much as thinks of taking off Orrin's clothes, they conveniently rip and have to be removed. Beyond that, what I see as an essential part of the story is that each shop gives each customer what it knows will leave them satisfied, rather than what they merely claim to want. Suffice it to say that by the end, Orrin will definitely be "smooth, polished, and popular with girls."

easdf
1/3/22, 10:54 PM
@A Voyeur Fan My comment wasn't meant to criticize your work, it was just something I found interesting and felt clever to share it. So I hope I didn't send the wrong message here, because I absolutely loved the chapter. I thought it was the same voice from Noam's story, but I think the idea that there are multiple shops in different places is super cool (and in some way makes it more relatable)
1/3/22, 9:57 PM
A very creative punishment! I will say for me it was unclear exactly what was happening with the whipped cream and the oatmeal at first. They both seemed to come out of nowhere? Maybe a reference to either one earlier would make it a bit clearer. I have no idea where this will go next. How exciting. 😊