Recent Comments

1/4/22, 2:29 PM
Nice. Some minor typos but didn't detract. Looking forward to more.
1/4/22, 11:56 AM
If this phrase resonates with you... "the smell of guys leather boots old clothes damp clothes so erotic" then you need to get familiar with the works of Blufman who strikes a primitive chord in a mangled syntax way. That may be why it rings so true for me, and maybe you.
1/4/22, 6:12 AM
Applause. Always applause
1/4/22, 5:11 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! Looking forward to future chapters.
1/4/22, 4:59 AM
The intersection of characters and story and fates. Like a gayer frank Miller tale or something Favorite were cops and jail and figures and tension there but all given distinct feel and voice Pigtown as..forget it Jake it's Chinatown sort of drama is surprisingly nice Love the depiction of the flesh and identity messing power and how makes him alike but different from the other specially gifted pigtownies Almost implying his power was his own not granted or grafted Ditto examining how pigtown now a complex interwoven growing system Seriously wish some poor sap would illustrate this with all the scenery movement surrealism and see But like no circulation potential so anyone decent turning thus into a graphic novel cost more than you likely make camming and and never make back from customers Still to me best pigtown as not just nasty but heartfelt either some more appealing elements 9/10 story.
Anonymous
1/4/22, 3:44 AM
I'm curious as to what your gonna do with Bud.

1/4/22, 4:42 AM
Bud will be coming, but later. We'll be dealing with Eric, Brandon, and Dylan for a while. And then, Larry who has ideas of his own about the Dares.
1/4/22, 4:42 AM
Also, I'm a super fan of the exhibitionism and the jocks being oblivious/innocent to how lewd and slutty they are being. Keep this up!
1/4/22, 4:41 AM
Another great, super hot chapter. Can't wait to see the game putting Xander in more tricky, sexy situations with other hot hung jocks!
1/1/22, 6:09 AM
Very good story, but I'm a sucker for manipulative, dominant Bottoms… I guess I'm biased!

1/1/22, 4:28 PM
@topdog Haha, fair enough. Sounds like you'd be interested in seeing how Rami became some manipulative. ;)

1/3/22, 7:36 PM
No doubt about it, @DownWriteNasty. Will there be a continuation?

1/4/22, 2:10 AM
@topdog Im thinking about it...!
Anonymous
1/3/22, 11:08 AM
This is a really hot story, I love "daddification" and seeing a guy (whether sub/dom/top/bottom) creating his own daddy!

1/4/22, 2:10 AM
Awesome! Thank you for the feedback!