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1/4/22, 4:42 AM
Also, I'm a super fan of the exhibitionism and the jocks being oblivious/innocent to how lewd and slutty they are being. Keep this up!
1/4/22, 4:41 AM
Another great, super hot chapter. Can't wait to see the game putting Xander in more tricky, sexy situations with other hot hung jocks!
1/1/22, 6:09 AM
Very good story, but I'm a sucker for manipulative, dominant Bottoms… I guess I'm biased!

1/1/22, 4:28 PM
@topdog Haha, fair enough. Sounds like you'd be interested in seeing how Rami became some manipulative. ;)

1/3/22, 7:36 PM
No doubt about it, @DownWriteNasty. Will there be a continuation?

1/4/22, 2:10 AM
@topdog Im thinking about it...!
Anonymous
1/3/22, 11:08 AM
This is a really hot story, I love "daddification" and seeing a guy (whether sub/dom/top/bottom) creating his own daddy!

1/4/22, 2:10 AM
Awesome! Thank you for the feedback!
1/3/22, 11:50 PM
so excited to see another installment of this series! excellent work as always :)
easdf
1/2/22, 11:43 PM
Now this is a twist I did not expect. It's strange because until now it had seemed that the barber shop had aimed to please each customer's own desires while at the same time leading them to the happy ending. In this chapter it seems that the barber shop had decided to take Emery as its project while being a bit hostile towards Orrin. Then again I don't want to misinterpret and take the mood out. Having said that, I am really intrigued to see the result and Orrin's reaction to the new him and the new Emery (which with his new dom vibe it's bound to be hot as fuck). Can't wait for the next episode!

1/2/22, 11:54 PM
@easdf I had nothing to do with these sequels beyond rubber-stamping their publication as the series owner, so this is just my guess, but: I read the Voice as being an entirely different one from the original I wrote. To me, this one has a peppy, almost Jonathan Van Ness vibe, vs the Laurence Fishburne iteration. My personal guess/headcanon at this point is that there are any number of spirits, each with their own barbershops. #worldbuilding :D

1/3/22, 1:13 AM
@easdf As the original author astutely picked up on, my intention was that this voice (and shop) are different from those in the original story. My intent wasn't to exactly replicate the original voice but to create a new one with its own quirks and idiosyncrasies (among other differences, Noam's voice uses "I" to refer to itself while mine uses "we") Regarding Orrin, without giving too much away I thought I'd toy around with the idea of him being brought into the shop not as much for his own sake but rather to be part of the fulfillment of Emery's wish. Notice how as soon as Emery so much as thinks of taking off Orrin's clothes, they conveniently rip and have to be removed. Beyond that, what I see as an essential part of the story is that each shop gives each customer what it knows will leave them satisfied, rather than what they merely claim to want. Suffice it to say that by the end, Orrin will definitely be "smooth, polished, and popular with girls."

easdf
1/3/22, 10:54 PM
@A Voyeur Fan My comment wasn't meant to criticize your work, it was just something I found interesting and felt clever to share it. So I hope I didn't send the wrong message here, because I absolutely loved the chapter. I thought it was the same voice from Noam's story, but I think the idea that there are multiple shops in different places is super cool (and in some way makes it more relatable)
1/3/22, 9:57 PM
A very creative punishment! I will say for me it was unclear exactly what was happening with the whipped cream and the oatmeal at first. They both seemed to come out of nowhere? Maybe a reference to either one earlier would make it a bit clearer. I have no idea where this will go next. How exciting. 😊
ROBGAGGED
1/3/22, 8:56 PM
Tim treatment is so appelling
Mr. Jack Off
1/3/22, 7:30 PM
Cant wait for more! Love a good 'top-to-bottom' and 'power exchange' story .... especially with cocky studs in suits!!
1/3/22, 6:03 PM
Very strong piece of writing - thank you very much.