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1/3/22, 3:47 AM
Please let me know if there is a good tag for the use of numbing cream. I feel in this context it is very chastity adjacent, but I'm not sure that's the best fit.

1/3/22, 2:19 PM
@Dreamweavr "denial" would be the best fit, I'm shocked it's not an actual tag yet. "Erotic denial" or denial for short is a pretty fundamental kink that covers a lot of ground and cuts across straight and gay BDSM.

1/3/22, 2:33 PM
@amul In fact, chastity play is properly a sub-set of erotic denial.
1/3/22, 1:40 PM
Incredible story! I love the tantalizing clues about what the gym is doing. And it's a surprisingly spot-on analysis of people who are really, REALLY into fitness...
1/3/22, 1:39 PM
I'm new to the story but enjoying it quite a bit! I do hope to see more items and perks, and to see what they do. And maybe a failed quest (that doesn't result in the game ending). Or a bonus that the protagonist didn't quite want. Looking forward to more!
1/3/22, 11:50 AM
great story, love the idea of lidocaine and public humiliation!

1/3/22, 1:34 PM
Thanks! I don't see a lot of lidocaine stuff on here or really online anywhere, but I find it really hot. It's like a chastity cage that you absolutely cannot remove for a couple hours. @James Heller
1/3/22, 10:18 AM
Incredible. Most original story I've read on here in ages.

1/3/22, 1:32 PM
Thank you very much! @Lacerator
1/3/22, 9:09 AM
Very hot. Probably one of the best stories I have read in a while that I have already sent to some subs who I think will enjoy as well. I am definitely excited for the next, hopefully many, chapters. Love the TPE aspect that is only heightened by the possible MC/sci-fi/fantasy elements that are hinted at with the cream and ending. Very well done.

1/3/22, 1:32 PM
Thanks! I do have a few more chapters in mind. In this chapter, I was trying to be as "realistic" as possible - some exaggeration in what bodies are capable of, but concerning larger than life mc and sci fi, my aim for this chapter to be absent if it. The protagonist can't help himself simply because he's a submissive, hedonistic slut, not through any kind of supernatural mc - though he's definitely being manipulated and toyed with. And I tried to keep the numbing aspect as realistic as possible in this chapter, but you're right that it hints at some of the kind of more fantastical changes I'm planning for. And, of course, everything is open to interpretation. @TPE Master Nik
Anonymous
1/3/22, 12:25 PM
Hi, absolutely love this series, thanks for reviving it! In terms of what comes next, I'd maybe like to see Jimmy and the rest of the team complain about Brody's erections, and get coach to put him in chastity (for his own good, of course). Also possibly have coach convince Hank that Brody is lacking protein, so Hank starts making him drink his cum each morning. In terms of festive stuff, I'd potentially like to see Brody finger fucked or fisted while sat on Santa's lap, ideally with Hank looking on but somehow oblivious. Excited to see where you go with this
Anonymous
1/3/22, 10:53 AM
i agree with Jack Parker. -This story is an epic takedown and more is going on than imagined. I'd give a left nut for more!
1/3/22, 10:32 AM
Nicely written. More, please!
1/3/22, 10:23 AM
Missing you and your writings. I hope you're enjoying a fun break from writing and are in a good headspace x o