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1/3/22, 10:18 AM
Incredible. Most original story I've read on here in ages.

1/3/22, 1:32 PM
Thank you very much! @Lacerator
1/3/22, 9:09 AM
Very hot. Probably one of the best stories I have read in a while that I have already sent to some subs who I think will enjoy as well. I am definitely excited for the next, hopefully many, chapters. Love the TPE aspect that is only heightened by the possible MC/sci-fi/fantasy elements that are hinted at with the cream and ending. Very well done.

1/3/22, 1:32 PM
Thanks! I do have a few more chapters in mind. In this chapter, I was trying to be as "realistic" as possible - some exaggeration in what bodies are capable of, but concerning larger than life mc and sci fi, my aim for this chapter to be absent if it. The protagonist can't help himself simply because he's a submissive, hedonistic slut, not through any kind of supernatural mc - though he's definitely being manipulated and toyed with. And I tried to keep the numbing aspect as realistic as possible in this chapter, but you're right that it hints at some of the kind of more fantastical changes I'm planning for. And, of course, everything is open to interpretation. @TPE Master Nik
Anonymous
1/3/22, 12:25 PM
Hi, absolutely love this series, thanks for reviving it! In terms of what comes next, I'd maybe like to see Jimmy and the rest of the team complain about Brody's erections, and get coach to put him in chastity (for his own good, of course). Also possibly have coach convince Hank that Brody is lacking protein, so Hank starts making him drink his cum each morning. In terms of festive stuff, I'd potentially like to see Brody finger fucked or fisted while sat on Santa's lap, ideally with Hank looking on but somehow oblivious. Excited to see where you go with this
Anonymous
1/3/22, 10:53 AM
i agree with Jack Parker. -This story is an epic takedown and more is going on than imagined. I'd give a left nut for more!
1/3/22, 10:32 AM
Nicely written. More, please!
1/3/22, 10:23 AM
Missing you and your writings. I hope you're enjoying a fun break from writing and are in a good headspace x o
1/3/22, 9:12 AM
In the barbering/hair cutting genre, this story is a real grand achievement. The slow, deliberate pace and the details lavished on the process were at the same time ponderous and perfect. That others are asking for a continuation of Dan's saga says that he has been identified as a sympathetic figure and a real character. Look at some of the heavy-hitting authors who have befriended this work! I don't know if we need to see more of Dan. But I do know that we need to hear more from Flattop.
1/3/22, 8:41 AM
๐Ÿ‘€ ๐Ÿ‘€ fair point. Add me to the roster coach!
11/3/21, 12:44 AM
They forgot Eric can tell someone else to dare them.

Anonymous
1/3/22, 8:04 AM
Unless the dare will harm them or be used to take revenge on them.
1/3/22, 7:19 AM
Extremely erotic. It is always great to follow the bottom's mind processes as he gives himself to pleasure, and to the pleasure of another man. I also liked how the main character tried to be a bratโ€ฆ and failed.