Recent Comments

Ome
1/3/22, 4:46 AM
😍🌠✨🤩🌠✨
Anonymous
1/3/22, 4:26 AM
Nice ending!! Nice series!!
Anonymous
1/3/22, 4:25 AM
I agree. Can't wait to see where this is going!
1/3/22, 4:12 AM
Hmm Just not fan of superboy Kon El And domination of super families never feel new or challenging especially as kick out the legs versus overcome them This is rationally intense and psychologically engaging And gives opportunity to contrast and compare. So thanks and might change my mind when disinclined Making fine exercise for you to take. Hope good feedback
1/3/22, 4:10 AM
Elegant, hot, intriguing. Well done man!
1/3/22, 2:03 AM
Incredibly hot story. I'm very turned on by the idea of a muscular sub pigging out. Loved the size exchange, the weight gain, the cock shrink, all of it. I especially enjoyed them being in a happy relationship, and staying in that happy relationship. In terms of editing, I'd suggest breaking your last block of text into more paragraphs. The rest wasn't too hard to read, but I always err on the side of shorter paragraphs rather than longer. I also noticed a couple name swaps that were a little confusing at first, but once I got a grip on the characters, it was easy to parse through them. Still, for such a short story your covered a lot of descriptive ground, and I have to give you props for that. I only wonder how much better it could be with a bit of extra polish!
1/3/22, 12:08 AM
I love seeing a protective brother. I'm glad he was able to pretty much stay himself bin the end. Just more gayer.
1/2/22, 11:52 PM
Accidental contact with the hair removal formula may be affecting Travis. Either that or Diego is dosing him so he'll get the promotion. If so Diego needs to be shaved as well.
1/2/22, 11:44 PM
The transformations are getting hotter and hotter!
1/2/22, 11:37 PM
I wonder if the captain had anti-gay history as well. I suspected it was a relative but since last names weren't mentioned for the transformed guys or their victims I had no idea who the one behind everything would be. No spoilers from me though. These guys got off easy for being responsible for such horrible crimes.