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1/3/22, 6:22 AM
Loving this so far--please keep it going!
1/3/22, 6:10 AM
Great to see you back, Willie! This is such a good set-up chapter; I'm really excited to see where it goes!
1/3/22, 5:26 AM
I'm mostly unmoved by comic book erotica (there have been exceptions) so I approached this one in an impartial/mildly interested way. I haven't read the original story this was based on, and I actually had to look up who this "Tim" person was - that's my only criticism by the way, you assumed too much familiarity with the DC universe on the part of your reader, there will always be the oddball like me who would have appreciated being told that "Tim" was "Tim Drake" aka one of the Robins (who can even keep track, there's been like 40 of them). Story is exceedingly well-written, has a nice erotic charge. The bully is menacing but oh so hot. It's almost believable that Superboy could actually feel threatened by him (almost - it does strain credulity still) and it's certainly believable that he's so attracted to this guy that it's put him on his back foot. Will definitely read chapter 2 when it comes along.
1/3/22, 5:19 AM
Nice and fun first chapter. Jet on his knees was hot.
Ome
1/3/22, 4:46 AM
😍🌠✨🤩🌠✨
Anonymous
1/3/22, 4:26 AM
Nice ending!! Nice series!!
Anonymous
1/3/22, 4:25 AM
I agree. Can't wait to see where this is going!
1/3/22, 4:12 AM
Hmm Just not fan of superboy Kon El And domination of super families never feel new or challenging especially as kick out the legs versus overcome them This is rationally intense and psychologically engaging And gives opportunity to contrast and compare. So thanks and might change my mind when disinclined Making fine exercise for you to take. Hope good feedback
1/3/22, 4:10 AM
Elegant, hot, intriguing. Well done man!
1/3/22, 2:03 AM
Incredibly hot story. I'm very turned on by the idea of a muscular sub pigging out. Loved the size exchange, the weight gain, the cock shrink, all of it. I especially enjoyed them being in a happy relationship, and staying in that happy relationship. In terms of editing, I'd suggest breaking your last block of text into more paragraphs. The rest wasn't too hard to read, but I always err on the side of shorter paragraphs rather than longer. I also noticed a couple name swaps that were a little confusing at first, but once I got a grip on the characters, it was easy to parse through them. Still, for such a short story your covered a lot of descriptive ground, and I have to give you props for that. I only wonder how much better it could be with a bit of extra polish!