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1/3/22, 2:03 AM
Incredibly hot story. I'm very turned on by the idea of a muscular sub pigging out. Loved the size exchange, the weight gain, the cock shrink, all of it. I especially enjoyed them being in a happy relationship, and staying in that happy relationship. In terms of editing, I'd suggest breaking your last block of text into more paragraphs. The rest wasn't too hard to read, but I always err on the side of shorter paragraphs rather than longer. I also noticed a couple name swaps that were a little confusing at first, but once I got a grip on the characters, it was easy to parse through them. Still, for such a short story your covered a lot of descriptive ground, and I have to give you props for that. I only wonder how much better it could be with a bit of extra polish!
1/3/22, 12:08 AM
I love seeing a protective brother. I'm glad he was able to pretty much stay himself bin the end. Just more gayer.
1/2/22, 11:52 PM
Accidental contact with the hair removal formula may be affecting Travis. Either that or Diego is dosing him so he'll get the promotion. If so Diego needs to be shaved as well.
1/2/22, 11:44 PM
The transformations are getting hotter and hotter!
1/2/22, 11:37 PM
I wonder if the captain had anti-gay history as well. I suspected it was a relative but since last names weren't mentioned for the transformed guys or their victims I had no idea who the one behind everything would be. No spoilers from me though. These guys got off easy for being responsible for such horrible crimes.
1/2/22, 11:19 PM
Awesome! Thanks for the explanation!
1/1/22, 9:28 PM
A very hot ending. I hope they enjoy their new lives. It does get me thinking. How these 'Gods' would like to have their realities rewritten?

1/2/22, 4:54 PM
tell me more @Cutlerfan

1/2/22, 11:18 PM
@Lusty Stallion Some cosmic force either changes them or makes them change each other.
1/2/22, 10:57 PM
a protective big bro huh? I did not saw it coming, but he did not had to turn the captain, all he needed was erase the memory about the latter after telling him to burn it
Yourguy92
1/2/22, 10:53 PM
That's an impressive start. Good job.
1/2/22, 10:44 PM
Ooh, the plot - among other things - thickens! Enjoying this. Keep it coming!