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1/2/22, 8:47 AM
where could i sign up ?
Lakritz24
1/2/22, 8:14 AM
Hallo, hollow, sehr fantastisch und mysteriös, geradezu verführerisch. Wozu junge Lust einen nicht bringen kann. Leider können nicht beide Freunde miteinander dort in einer gemeinsammen Phantasie sein. An den rubber drone master: all hail the rubber-ED master. Sometimes experimenting with liquid RTV-Silicon-Rubber. Always be carefully while "experimenting" New.
Anonymous
1/2/22, 6:01 AM
well written & layed out.
Jan 1, 2019
1/2/22, 5:41 AM
Too short. Give us a re-write with more of the transformation. You've got talent.
jay
1/2/22, 5:36 AM
well arranged.
1/2/22, 2:28 AM
I thought Troy was too inexperienced to investigate this case...but as long as Fitness Empire ruled, it doesn't matter ;)
Jan 22, 2021
1/2/22, 2:25 AM
New chapter plsss
Anonymous
1/2/22, 2:10 AM
great to see the next chapter so early!! thanks a lot!!
1/1/22, 10:01 PM
I like the chapters with Mark in them better. I don't care too much for the supporting characters. I want to see Mark react to the changes. I'd love to see him grow to love owning Steve. I want him to spank Steve over his knee, bare assed until Steve cries like a little boy. And I want Mark to make Steve worship his sweaty armpits. There are a lot of sweaty feet pieces at this site but I have to go to Twitter for armpit worship stories. I'd love for the job to be too much for Steve so he quits with Mark's approval and thinks that means he's not a sub anymore and Mark asks him how that happens and Steve says he'll just go to court and reverse it only for Mark to explain that subs don't have the rights to file a court case only a Dom can do that and Mark thinks they'll be happier with steve as a sub and now also as a housewife whose job is to cook and clean for his Dom. Steve argues and Mark says enough backtalk from you, pulls steve over his lap and spanks steve until steve is both crying and thrusting against Mark's lsp until he comes.. Then while he's still riding his orgasm high, his Dom begins rouhly screwing him. Then in an epilogue, friends from college come by and see sub steve. Mark makes steve respect and serve the men who are now just Mark's friends because no Norm could respect a little sub boy. I want M ark to love owning steve and spanking him and love being in charge but i want Mark to grasp all he now has and love steve even more for giving up everything and accepting Mark as the master of the house and as the boss in their marriage.

1/2/22, 12:47 AM
@Luke J Jr Wow, that's a lot of thoughts. You've certainly thought it through! Thanks for the message. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. I think you will like where the story is going. There will be plenty of interactions between Mark and Steve as their relationship develops.
1/2/22, 12:37 AM
You have so many stories on this site, so many great ones, too, but this one may be my personal favorite - can't wait for more!