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12/12/21, 6:00 AM
fuck i want to be gray's bitch! lol

12/12/21, 7:01 AM
@BiBear34 haha right?

12/31/21, 7:27 PM
me too! @BiBear34
12/31/21, 12:07 PM
Oof. I didn't realize how close to the surface my own self-loathing about my intelligence was. This got a little too real for me and now I've got to type something to keep the feelings from getting overwhelming. Still, even if I can't get off to it, it's a marvelously well-written achievement.

12/31/21, 7:26 PM
Thanks @Bryx, I appreciate the comment. I think a lot of people who are into dumbing down probably share that, and this is a different enough take that it might find some fresh raw nerves.
12/31/21, 3:14 PM
Woof! This was a good one Nex! You are firing on all cylinders with your descriptions and transformations. Can't wait to see what else you post up here.

12/31/21, 6:51 PM
@Cadek Thanks very much! Glad to see you here!
12/31/21, 1:03 PM
Great transformation sequence - i loved the way you went into detail. Very hot!

12/31/21, 6:50 PM
@el mexicano 4091 Thanks very much! I'm glad I didn't bore you with the details!
12/31/21, 4:24 AM
Amazingly hot transformation story! I hope my bedroom closet changes me like that.

12/31/21, 6:46 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks very much! Clothes do make the man, right?
Sep
12/30/21, 2:18 AM
please continue this series

12/31/21, 6:45 PM
@Sep Thanks! I just might!
12/24/21, 4:25 AM
I really like this concept. Jeffrey is on his way to becoming a more muscular, more obnoxious version of Paxton. I look forward to seeing why Payton needed him to become his new warrior. Presumably as a training partner and co-competitor. One things for sure Jeffrey is going to need serious bulk at his height. Seems those shakes must have more than just spunk in them. Nice start. Total physical and mental transformation. Will he end up getting kicked out of the gym after his warrior conversion? Please keep it up. Thanks.

12/31/21, 5:19 PM
@SMC2710 Thanks for the feedback! I'll certainly look to continue the story in the future. :)
12/31/21, 5:17 PM
Aw, thanks buddy!
12/31/21, 2:46 PM
This story is twisted in such a good way.
12/31/21, 1:09 PM
welcome back