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12/31/21, 2:02 PM
This is delightful. I do think the rule four of human behavior is a bit iffy, given how much of his life had been affected by his intellect up until that point, and it would take a bit of intellect to rationalize away all those events. The event leading up to his first ass fuck is also quite random. Assuming it was part of the plan all along to turn him gay bottom there must have been a different, more thought out plan waiting that got scrapped for this spur of the moment event. I would easily have accepted him being dom top even after it. All those are more plot points to ponder rather than any actual complaints.

1/1/22, 2:08 AM
Glad you enjoyed it @Josh Slater. I’ve generally found rule four to ring true in my own life and with those I know. It happens quickly here, but that’s a short story for you. As for the narrators plan, I’d suggest that he’s more like a great jazz musician, improvising with skill.
Dec 25, 2021
1/1/22, 1:56 AM
It was a wonderful story, and it surprised me with how sweet it was.
1/1/22, 12:22 AM
I just love that you're going through so many different universes for this series, what with Disney's Herc, and Spiderman, and Superman! I look forward to seeing what happens next!

1/1/22, 12:53 AM
@Some Guy yeah it's gonna be a wild ride lol
12/31/21, 11:55 PM
A little belatedly, I have finally found a pic of Tom. Like, this is *exactly* the image I had of him in my head! [Tom](https://twitter.com/HairybearJ/status/1471347892006924288/photo/1)
12/31/21, 11:34 PM
Travis and Diego need to get the treatment. What a jerk Travis is. Hope there is more.
12/31/21, 11:26 PM
Definitely looking forward to more of this!
12/31/21, 6:32 PM
Thanks for taking up the mantle! I look forward to seeing where you take this.

12/31/21, 11:24 PM
@Noam de Pluma Happy to build on your original setting, even with a spiritual sequel!
12/31/21, 11:00 PM
I hope it is revealed who started all these TFs and why. I mean that theguys' homophobia was the obvious reason but what else? Lucas makes a fine leather daddy.
12/31/21, 9:40 PM
Lovely little story. Young hypnotists had better be careful creating daddies because Daddy is always in charge and Daddy is always right.

12/31/21, 10:29 PM
@amul Thank you! Something tells me there's a group on GSS that wouldn't mind that. Lol
11/21/21, 4:33 AM
Special thanks to Time.to.Occur for proofing and to Noam De Pluma for encouraging me to return to this series! Enjoy guys!

11/21/21, 4:36 AM
@Dace <3 As you know, I love this chapter and Emrys's personality. Thank you for returning to the series!

12/31/21, 10:28 PM
Jesus effing Christ, @Dace, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this given I was one of the ones pestering you to publish the next installment, but my GOD is this fantastic! The characterization is absolutely brilliant. Emrys is such a mix of naive and smart and innocent and worldly. And the sex, of course, is hot. Much as I'd love to have seen them get past where they did, from a literary standpoint I love where you left them. So good. Honestly, I can see this story being worthy of mainstream publication - particularly if you take out the graphic sex and focus it on the other bits of story taking place.