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11/21/21, 4:33 AM
Special thanks to Time.to.Occur for proofing and to Noam De Pluma for encouraging me to return to this series! Enjoy guys!

11/21/21, 4:36 AM
@Dace <3 As you know, I love this chapter and Emrys's personality. Thank you for returning to the series!

12/31/21, 10:28 PM
Jesus effing Christ, @Dace, I'm sorry it took me so long to get to this given I was one of the ones pestering you to publish the next installment, but my GOD is this fantastic! The characterization is absolutely brilliant. Emrys is such a mix of naive and smart and innocent and worldly. And the sex, of course, is hot. Much as I'd love to have seen them get past where they did, from a literary standpoint I love where you left them. So good. Honestly, I can see this story being worthy of mainstream publication - particularly if you take out the graphic sex and focus it on the other bits of story taking place.
12/31/21, 8:48 PM
the chapter was short, but great, now let see how the figurines are and how their lives will move on from here, and maybe who did t
12/12/21, 6:00 AM
fuck i want to be gray's bitch! lol

12/12/21, 7:01 AM
@BiBear34 haha right?

12/31/21, 7:27 PM
me too! @BiBear34
12/31/21, 12:07 PM
Oof. I didn't realize how close to the surface my own self-loathing about my intelligence was. This got a little too real for me and now I've got to type something to keep the feelings from getting overwhelming. Still, even if I can't get off to it, it's a marvelously well-written achievement.

12/31/21, 7:26 PM
Thanks @Bryx, I appreciate the comment. I think a lot of people who are into dumbing down probably share that, and this is a different enough take that it might find some fresh raw nerves.
12/31/21, 3:14 PM
Woof! This was a good one Nex! You are firing on all cylinders with your descriptions and transformations. Can't wait to see what else you post up here.

12/31/21, 6:51 PM
@Cadek Thanks very much! Glad to see you here!
12/31/21, 1:03 PM
Great transformation sequence - i loved the way you went into detail. Very hot!

12/31/21, 6:50 PM
@el mexicano 4091 Thanks very much! I'm glad I didn't bore you with the details!
12/31/21, 4:24 AM
Amazingly hot transformation story! I hope my bedroom closet changes me like that.

12/31/21, 6:46 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks very much! Clothes do make the man, right?
Sep
12/30/21, 2:18 AM
please continue this series

12/31/21, 6:45 PM
@Sep Thanks! I just might!
12/24/21, 4:25 AM
I really like this concept. Jeffrey is on his way to becoming a more muscular, more obnoxious version of Paxton. I look forward to seeing why Payton needed him to become his new warrior. Presumably as a training partner and co-competitor. One things for sure Jeffrey is going to need serious bulk at his height. Seems those shakes must have more than just spunk in them. Nice start. Total physical and mental transformation. Will he end up getting kicked out of the gym after his warrior conversion? Please keep it up. Thanks.

12/31/21, 5:19 PM
@SMC2710 Thanks for the feedback! I'll certainly look to continue the story in the future. :)
12/31/21, 5:17 PM
Aw, thanks buddy!