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12/28/21, 12:36 AM
This is definitely one of my all-time favorite stories. I love that Tom is non-binary and Nate may be submissive to them. It would be awesome if Nate and/or Jack became so entranced by Tom, they would become non-binary femboys too, or at least adopt some of Tom's traits like the thigh-high sock fetish or brightly colored hair :) I have a long list of fetishes and this story has just added socks and feet to my list! I've written a few stories and I know how much effort goes into good stories like these, so thank you for sharing! XOXO -tay

12/28/21, 4:20 AM
@Taylor personally dont approve of that as being non binary isnt something you can hypnotise someone into,as its what you are, but hey this is a site full of straight to gay stories so who am i to judge- from an non binary boyflux person

12/28/21, 12:07 PM
@Taylor Hi Tay, this was so amazingly nice to read! Thank you so much! The fact that this is one of your favourite stories, on this site where there are already so many amazing stories, has made my day. So thank you. Haha, that's amazing about the feet and socks! I can't believe my writing is powerful enough to make people realise how sexy feet and socks are lol. And yeah, I wouldn't have Nate or Jack suddenly become non-binary because i don't want to fetishise non-binary identity if you get me - with Tom, i just wanted to have a sexy character who also happens to be non-binary. However, Jack and Nate taking on some of Tom's more fem traits could work. And thank you so much! Yes a lot of work went into this one, that's why it took longer to come out! Thank you again for your amazing feedback, so much x

12/28/21, 3:56 PM
@FKH19 I'm so glad you enjoyed my feedback! As a non-binary person myself, I appreciate you being sensitive to fetishising the NB identity. Personally, I enjoy that type of transformation just as many gay guys like straight-to-gay stories, but I understand others may find it offensive. Putting the NB identity aside, it would be adorable if Jack and Nate emulated some of Tom's cute traits (voice, smooth skin, fun hair, sock fetish for example) as they become Daddy's boys. You have a great imagination, so I'm looking forward to seeing your next chapter! By the way, it was awesome to see Tom's family using they/them pronouns so naturally. Thank you for that!

12/29/21, 8:37 PM
@Taylor Thank you so much! Yeah i'm very sensitive to cheap representation or exploitation/fetishisation. But thank you for explaining your point of view and why it's hot! I can get behind that, I'd just have to try and write it in a non-crass way haha. With this story i just wanted to feature a NB identity in a natural way, where one of the characters happens to be NB. BUT, if it's something you would enjoy, I could try and write a (tasteful ;) ) story of a cis guy being made non-binary. How do you think it should work - him being made NB by a sexy non-binary master? :) Hehe that's a fun idea about them taking on some of Tom's traits, they will definitely be sock sluts like Tom by the end of the story (if they aren't already!) and I did already have some fun ideas regarding the thigh high socks as well ;) Aw thank you so much! Like I said, I wanted some natural, good representation of a NB person, and using the correct pronouns is the least a person can do :)

12/29/21, 9:31 PM
@FKH19 Thanks for your nice reply! You're a talented writer, so I'd love to see you write a story about a NB transformation (or maybe it's more of a discovery/awakening). I have dozens of ideas how that could work :) If you'd like to brainstorm together on Telegram (preferred) or Discord or wherever, I'd be down.

12/29/21, 9:35 PM
@Taylor Just sent you a message on the GSS forum :)

12/30/21, 7:44 AM
@FKH19 i sould like to give input as well if youre writing a story like that?

12/30/21, 10:31 PM
@Dapper sure, feel free to message me on here, I'd love to hear from you :)
Anonymous
12/30/21, 10:05 PM
Fantastic story! Can't wait to read the next part!
12/23/21, 4:08 PM
Interesting storyline. Would be great when Sam"s sons, working out their muscles in the gym, will get an active part in the transformation into a sex slave of their father.... Hope Erik will finally come home from work in his uniform.

Blackjinx123
12/30/21, 9:49 PM
@uniform53, i do plan on adding Sam's son's in, but that will have to wait awhile. And don't worry, officer Erik Kingston will make his entrance eventually!
12/23/21, 9:17 AM
The other comments mirror my thoughts! The characterisation is on point, everyone feels unique and believable! Vince at school sounds like a sequel to me!

Blackjinx123
12/30/21, 9:46 PM
@Norismo, I'm so happy to hear that! Writing each character is always a joy and a fun challenge, so I'm thrilled that came across. It's not always easy switching from one perspective to another, but i always have such a blast doing it! As to Vince going to school as a sequel, that is 100% what i plan on doing. Great minds think alike ;)
12/22/21, 9:04 PM
Mac really need to learn his place, here I’m hoping he gets some discipline while helping to punish the others This was amazingly hot, it’s definitely an interesting addition to the mix. So Sam… I do wonder how much he will discover b4 Vince notice him could this become in a battle of wills? Also, happy holidays! Thx for this gift!

Blackjinx123
12/30/21, 9:42 PM
@zeeker8b, I can promise much punishment in the future. I'm so glad you liked the new addition and the chapter, and you are welcome! I figured finally popping Mac's present would be a nice present for the holiday season ;)
12/22/21, 4:38 PM
Oh no...I knew Sam would mean trouble down the line,holy shit... But that's only a small concern compared to the joy the majority of this chapter brought me. IT FINALLY HAPPENED. And it was as great as I thought it would be. I like Mac's possessive streak,that's a nice dynamic

Blackjinx123
12/30/21, 9:39 PM
@ForgottenCradle, yeah, Sam was bound to be a pain in the ass eventually, considering his crappy personality ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the direction I've taken Mac, hope you like the next chapter just as much!
12/22/21, 10:31 AM
Oh, WOW this was a wild ride of a chapter, and i DEFINITELY was not expecting Sam to turn up when he did. How's he going to handle the Kingston men from here? He doesn't seem like the brightest bulb in the batch, but i wonder how he's going to get sat down to watch the video without resisting. Vince might have to have his family subdue him while they're all triggered. But that depends on how he attempts to deal with Vince, because I just have this FEELING in my GUT that Sam is just the sort of asshole that would own a gun and bring that gun into this. But MAC. OH MY GODS, MAC's transformation is SO gorgeous! His possessive streak is PERFECT especially considering his previous fear of commitment. it makes sense that when he would finally commit, he'd be HELLA possessive. His adoration, desperation and love for Vince is *chef's kiss* Spot on! and it's great that not only does Vince continue to balk at these moments of affection, but that he's recognizing it for the mark of abuse that it is. Good for Vince for being self aware. Sam had a thing for ole Momma Kingston? that's CRAZY. what a good angle! how is Vince going to twist this? Vince isn't in love with Sam like he is Mac so there's no real reason for Vince to shift Sam's adoration for his mom onto him completely, but I can just IMAGINE what fucked up stuff Sam is going to say and do in attempting to confront Vince. Homophobic language will be the least of it before the end. Sam is definitely lined up to dig himself QUITE a deep hole, and the possibilities for what Vince is going to punish him with are so vast. Clearly Vince isn't going to make him wanton, a pain slut, a humiliation slut, or a loving obsessive partner, he already has those, so pondering what he IS going to do is going to keep me warm this winter until you grace us with the next installment of this BEAUTIFUL fiction. As always, no rush! I am willing to be patient for your genius!

Blackjinx123
12/30/21, 9:38 PM
@Mind Labyrinth, thank you so much, I'm so happy you liked it! Your absolutely right to say Sam isn't the smartest man, and that plays a part in his downfall for sure. I had a super fun time writing this chapter, and I'm so glad it turned out the way it did. Adding Mac's new jealous, possessive nature is going to be a treat and play in important roll later on. Thank you so much for your patience, it's so appreciated, especially when I get brain block and spend days pulling my hair out to try and unclog it! Ch. 21 is in the works, and i hope to have it done soon. Again, thanks you for the praise and big, beautiful comment. My favorite part of posting each chapter is the comments and seeing what the readers thought. I hope you had a happy holiday and have a great new year! :D
Jack
12/22/21, 6:58 AM
Holy. Fucking. Shit. This was amazing! Mac is a fucking wet dream of a slave, and I can't wait to see more of him pushing all the right and wrong buttons with Vince. And Sam? Ooo, that's gonna be interesting.

Blackjinx123
12/30/21, 9:23 PM
@Jack, thank you! I had fun adding Mac to the mix and giving a glimpse of Sam. It's always a blast to write these chapters, but having a fresh character to fuck with is always a special treat.
12/30/21, 8:55 PM
This is starting out as a fun variation on the usual theme for these sorts of stories! Great work so far! I'll look forward to more!
Anonymous
12/30/21, 8:51 PM
great work!!