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7/12/25, 3:02 PM
Wow!! Thanks a lot!! It’s getting exciting.
Mar 15, 2024
7/12/25, 2:56 PM
I'd like to meet up with Dan and his crew. Happy to fill a bag with my useless degrees and career. Starting again as a chav bin boy! Yeah.
7/12/25, 1:30 PM
I’m repeating what others have said but fuck with that last footnote. So funny and hot and clever. Like this whole story. Playing with so many stereotypes and being so smart and having a point beyond just being hot while still being incredibly hot. Wow. This is now my new favorite story of the year.
7/12/25, 1:21 PM
The foot note at the end of this is hilarious. Well done again. Great middle chapter and perfect set up for what comes in the final chapter.
7/12/25, 1:04 PM
Wow. I only saw the third and final part of this yesterday and loved it. This is a nice surprise. Great set up. Very hot and very clever and very well done. This story has all the ingredients to be perfectly baked. A big dick and big muscular guy getting a bigger dick and more muscular and all of his football buddies coming along is hot as hell. The changes to the narrator are also hot as hell. And the narrator being somewhat aware that things can happen but still being clueless is chef’s kiss. And of course, all of that isn’t enough. This story is also a clever critique about our perspectives on camp, and done in a way that can be skipped if you don’t want to read the footnotes. Which is super meta and funny as hell while being insightful. I’m pretty sure who this author is and think they’ve managed to redux a mechanism they did on a previous story where we see parts of the same scene repeated in slight variations, each one hotter than the last. Also incredibly well done.
7/12/25, 12:10 PM
Sorry man, this was it! I wanted to leave the rest to the viewer's imagination.
7/12/25, 10:49 AM
Thanks, Bro!
Anonymous
7/12/25, 9:15 AM
Incredibly hot story. Can’t wait for next chapter and to see how much he’s gonna shrink!
7/12/25, 9:10 AM
Were there ever any more chapters to this story???
7/12/25, 5:25 AM
Here's a question to speculate on: What state will Jamie be in on the morning after? Will he still be in full or almost full slave mode? Will he have reverted completely to his angry, unhappy,, and stroppy self? Will he be somewhere in between? Please discuss. I'd love to see what everyone thinks on this.