Recent Comments

12/29/21, 10:45 PM
One of my all time favorites on here. Great, subtle details to your writing, especially in the dialog. Hope to read more from you soon, Rodready
12/29/21, 9:25 PM
How i wish i am in this town and be one of the jock sluts!
12/29/21, 6:10 PM
Thank you for taking this on at the last minute. I was waiting and it was worth the wait.

12/29/21, 7:13 PM
@Drake Nightstorm Were they your tags? I'm glad you liked it! Hoping to flesh things out a bit more in chapter 2!

12/29/21, 8:57 PM
@Norismo It's good and yes my tags I offered up for a story for me. The whole point of this was to go by tags alone.
12/29/21, 8:01 PM
Wow! I loved this one...very erotic powerplay. Excellent writing as well.

12/29/21, 8:13 PM
@JockTopper Thank you so much! <3
12/29/21, 7:39 PM
The end part was sweet and sexy but I wouldn't have minded seeing a sailor orgy! The initial set-up where you described this James Bond style character was really well done. What a sexy aging hunk you breathed life into.

12/29/21, 7:42 PM
@amul You always brighten my day with your kind words! I will try my best to have a good orgy scene in the next chapter. Not my forte! 😂

12/29/21, 8:11 PM
@Norismo I'm glad I can give you a good feel by making a comment. For me, your stories have a warmth and innocence that is super sexy. I do occasionally like the darker stuff but I will never get tired of your imagination and romantic whimsy, nor your sometimes scatterbrained but loveable characters.
Anonymous
12/29/21, 7:16 AM
great story. loved how he makes coach into his slutty pussy bitch. you def need to write another chapter. It's so hot when an older stud gets completely dominated and turned. if you need some ideas, cock-cages, pussy plugs (vibrating and non) and slutty lace panties come to mind. maybe coach has to wear all of them to work everyday to be a good boy.

12/29/21, 7:57 PM
Thanks for the suggestions @Anonymous. We'll see where things go.
12/29/21, 2:10 AM
Damn. That was hot. I want to go to coach's house too.

12/29/21, 7:56 PM
Thanks @TexMuscle.
Anonymous
12/28/21, 10:33 PM
WOW! This story is great. Better than part 1, if that's possible. Love it JockTopper.

12/29/21, 7:55 PM
Thanks @Anonymous. Glad you liked.
12/29/21, 5:03 PM
I'm anxious to read the next part! good job!

12/29/21, 7:12 PM
@Plymouth58 Thank you for the support 😄
12/29/21, 5:32 AM
Fantastic! Really enjoyed the musk element helping to cement his transformation

12/29/21, 5:18 PM
@Matchstickman Much appreciated. I am a man of musk :)