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Kods
12/30/21, 2:01 AM
This was a fun time!
Anonymous
12/29/21, 6:46 PM
where is the mind control?

12/29/21, 6:54 PM
@ This story is in the "Reprogramming" category. In this case, the Coach was reprogrammed from being a top to being a bottom by a skillful top dominating him. You can search for stories by categories or tags to ensure you're reading stories that hit your particular kinks. None of the tags in this story suggested there would be any hypnosis or classic "mind control".

12/29/21, 7:58 PM
I view the conversion of a top to a bottom as the mind control @Anonymous. I admit that it is subtle, but to many of us that makes it more erotic.

12/29/21, 7:59 PM
Thanks @amul. Very well said.

Anonymous
12/29/21, 11:40 PM
@amul I don't see this as reprogramming though
12/29/21, 10:36 PM
I have a suspicion that the person behind this might be a former victim of the homophobes. Maybe Dean? Or possibly one of the guys came out, denying his sexuality for a long time, and realized he knew lots of homophobes so he decided to replace their hate with lust?

12/29/21, 11:22 PM
@Cutlerfan interesting theories.....we will have to wait and see :)
12/29/21, 11:18 PM
Well, this was a delight. I wasn't sure where it was going at the beginning, but I was intrigued by the world building, and I'm glad I stuck it out. Really good stuff, and I look forward to a potential sequel!
12/29/21, 10:45 PM
One of my all time favorites on here. Great, subtle details to your writing, especially in the dialog. Hope to read more from you soon, Rodready
12/29/21, 9:25 PM
How i wish i am in this town and be one of the jock sluts!
12/29/21, 6:10 PM
Thank you for taking this on at the last minute. I was waiting and it was worth the wait.

12/29/21, 7:13 PM
@Drake Nightstorm Were they your tags? I'm glad you liked it! Hoping to flesh things out a bit more in chapter 2!

12/29/21, 8:57 PM
@Norismo It's good and yes my tags I offered up for a story for me. The whole point of this was to go by tags alone.
12/29/21, 8:01 PM
Wow! I loved this one...very erotic powerplay. Excellent writing as well.

12/29/21, 8:13 PM
@JockTopper Thank you so much! <3
12/29/21, 7:39 PM
The end part was sweet and sexy but I wouldn't have minded seeing a sailor orgy! The initial set-up where you described this James Bond style character was really well done. What a sexy aging hunk you breathed life into.

12/29/21, 7:42 PM
@amul You always brighten my day with your kind words! I will try my best to have a good orgy scene in the next chapter. Not my forte! 😂

12/29/21, 8:11 PM
@Norismo I'm glad I can give you a good feel by making a comment. For me, your stories have a warmth and innocence that is super sexy. I do occasionally like the darker stuff but I will never get tired of your imagination and romantic whimsy, nor your sometimes scatterbrained but loveable characters.
Anonymous
12/29/21, 7:16 AM
great story. loved how he makes coach into his slutty pussy bitch. you def need to write another chapter. It's so hot when an older stud gets completely dominated and turned. if you need some ideas, cock-cages, pussy plugs (vibrating and non) and slutty lace panties come to mind. maybe coach has to wear all of them to work everyday to be a good boy.

12/29/21, 7:57 PM
Thanks for the suggestions @Anonymous. We'll see where things go.