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12/27/21, 10:43 PM
Bittersweet Plant-TF that explores death and love!? You'll be hearing from my lawyers. (Wait, that's a bit unrealistic) ...you'll be hearing from my lawy**er**. (Wait, that's a bit unrealistic) ...you'll be hearing from *me*, logged in with a different, more lawyer-y sounding username. Joking aside, I found it quite a bold direction for you. Full points for enterprise. The story itself I found 'frustratingly close to excellent', but oddly paced in places, and oddly expressed in places. Then again, I was always going to be a fussy with this one since A; It's extremely close to my own style, so I am *as* hyperfocused on it's flaws as I'd be with my own stuff. And B; I was already reading through spoiler-tinted-shades since I remember you talking about this specific narrative on the discord and the idea stuck in my head (I wonder why :) ) Write more stories like this, please.
12/27/21, 10:18 PM
I love this series! Can't wait to see what happens to the remaining two!
12/27/21, 6:25 AM
An excellent story! A much more kind rendering of the transformations into muscle cows and bulls.

12/27/21, 9:59 PM
@Cutlerfan Thanks, Cutler. I'm glad you appreciated that aspect of the story. I tried to keep it kinky but make it a bit less dark, because that's my preference as well.
12/27/21, 5:27 PM
reading again and again. good start. very impressive
12/27/21, 4:38 PM
i really cant wait to read more of this. this story is the best. will we get more please?
12/27/21, 4:25 PM
Oh boy this was a hot read. I can't wait to see what happens to the other two now.
12/27/21, 1:25 PM
You're a gifted writer. More, please!
Anonymous
12/26/21, 10:38 PM
also something id imagine be really hot,tom streaming like usual while nate is worshipping their feet and jack on their cock

12/27/21, 11:26 AM
@anonymous Have you been reading my draft notes for future chapters? Hahaha ;)

12/27/21, 12:48 PM
@FKH19 i dont know why this comment is anonymous but its mine,and my thought was that the program creator who is totally not Dan ;),gets tom to somehow embed his app into his streams as like subliminal messaging turning all his adult viewers into incest sluts for their own family

12/27/21, 12:50 PM
@Dapper i think its dan because nate sent him a pic of him and tom cuddling and the next day was totally chill and also chilly referencing nate being a footslave for his
12/26/21, 8:23 PM
god i love all the fluff between tom and nate,i cant wait to see the whole family plus dan of course become a great polycule

12/27/21, 4:12 AM
@Dapper also i love the character development of tom not allowing anyone into his room while streaming,to him texting his new boyfriend/brother to come up and have under the desk fun

12/27/21, 11:29 AM
@Dapper Thank you! I'm so glad you like this part. Yes, I wanted cuteness between Nate and Tom because, at its heart, I wanted the story to be a light hearted, wholesome one (y'know, with lots of sex as well) And yes! Good job on picking up on that ;) Sexy character development

12/27/21, 12:45 PM
@FKH19 wonder if he took down his sign
12/27/21, 9:45 AM
oh,you were right,this IS raunchy but so so good. Can't wait until all 4 of them can play together as a family. and then find out who did this to them in the first place

12/27/21, 11:36 AM
@ForgottenCradle thank youuuu :) Yes, I wonder who is doing this to the family? Don't worry, there will be plenty of action with all 4 family members