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12/27/21, 8:42 AM
that was hot!! eagerly waiting for more!

12/27/21, 9:16 AM
Glad you enjoyed, the next chapter will be coming soon 😊@moolah
12/27/21, 8:46 AM
Now there is only two left
Yourguy92
12/27/21, 8:20 AM
I love the story and can't wait to see how JD and most likely his cousin continues to develop. Sometimes the story seems to push forward too quickly and we can't get enough of his feelings and thoughts. Not a bad thing but something you may consider for future stories 😊
12/27/21, 7:13 AM
The story is well paced.
12/26/21, 11:45 PM
i hope this one ends up in a happy

12/27/21, 6:33 AM
@darkblade2814 We'll see! 😜 It's about to get a LOT more complicated and confusing in the next few chapters if the plan goes well 😂
12/27/21, 5:19 AM
Wow this is surprisingly hot
12/27/21, 4:49 AM
While all of the stories are fun and enjoyable the one with the therapist and the one with the cuckolding are super sexy to me. Actually, the therapist one has me intrigued on what they were like pre-reality change. Like I can't tell if there was hypno before. hehe But yeah, this series of shorts are super sexy.
Apr 11, 2021
12/27/21, 4:28 AM
@hypnothrill would LOVE to see the rest of this story come to life. You are an amazing writer!
12/26/21, 6:01 PM
This is hot, and fresh, and new, and unlike anything I've read here before. I've loved your stuff for a long time, but this is fucking great!

12/27/21, 4:13 AM
Thanks @PTutius27! I actually had to create the ‘smarter’ tag for this one, but did so with Martin’s blessing.
12/26/21, 5:17 PM
Man! You nailed this! It's all been said above, but we loved you starting where you normally end (sweet, fun, content, gay muscle bro with supportive friends) but then making him smart. we all thought "No, don't do that to him Derek", but the depth of the human condition you explore is a new level here. I was gutted when he couldn't change reality, but quickly loved the direction he had to take. The mental changes. What a master piece. Give it a few years and this may well replace our favourite Derek Williams story. Plus 3 was my favourite and was almost beaten by your series around the town. I'll be re-reading this a few more times, but it truly is brilliance at so many levels! Thanks

12/27/21, 4:13 AM
Thanks @Lusty Stallion! I had fun playing with the formula here and I’m stoked where it went.