Recent Comments

12/14/21, 9:15 AM
god im so excited for next chapter,ive cum back to this one over and over again to get off

12/16/21, 7:22 PM
@Dapper ha, thank you. What's your favourite part? :)

12/17/21, 2:13 AM
@FKH19 tom and nate making out passionately as the climax to their hypnosis i hope we see more than that in future

12/20/21, 4:59 AM
any idea when chapter 3 will come out?@FKH19

12/23/21, 8:42 PM
@Dapper either tomorrow or just after Christmas. I'm glad you're so eager for its release ;)

12/23/21, 10:34 PM
@FKH19 Yay! its a christmas incest filled

12/23/21, 10:35 PM
@Dapper why does it censor the word m.iracle

12/23/21, 11:15 PM
@Dapper ha, definitely the best Christmas present

12/26/21, 9:42 AM
@FKH19 so excited!
Anonymous
12/26/21, 9:19 AM
I love the premise, it’s such a shame that this is so short!
12/26/21, 8:59 AM
this Chapter was great and also a whole new one too! nice choice of having a Halloween chapter i love what you did for Brodys outfit with his harness and jock. Im so sad where it left off! i want to see more and know whats going to go down at the meeting. i hope Coach has something juicy cooked up for hank and Brody tomorrow! i hope he can continue the corruption and humiliation of the two men! thank you for such a hot chapter cant wait for more new content!
12/25/21, 9:05 PM
such a hot story! definitely hope this continues (would love to see if aeron and xander end up brothers), or that we get to see daddy bear change other men!

12/26/21, 6:01 AM
@italianstalian1987 Thank you for the feedback! I don't know yet but maybe!
Anonymous
12/26/21, 5:39 AM
Would love to see Hank or one of the other teammates join Brody in this predicament
12/26/21, 5:28 AM
Lovely take on Drones. would love to read more
12/26/21, 3:58 AM
I've enjoyed the changes to Jake so far (they actually seem mostly positive, though the mind controller is totally a perv taking advantage of him, and now Scott). The way you described Scott was really hot, love those rugby bears. This one could have stood used more proof-reading for minor typos, though it didn't detract too much from the story.
12/26/21, 3:25 AM
I'm excited for the next step. I take it Zac will make Jon and/or Conner one of his sluts. I don't want to speculate because I'm just enjoying the journey

12/26/21, 3:43 AM
@Some Guy Make sure to read Monsterlands as well, it was posted earlier this week.

12/26/21, 3:56 AM
@Jack Parker I love that series as well! Can't wait for the next of this and the Monsterlands series. I enjoy a lot of your writing and look forward to seeing your writing when I come across it.

12/26/21, 3:57 AM
@Some Guy thats badass! cause next chapter of this will reveal a lot
12/26/21, 3:52 AM
So hot! Love them!