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12/25/21, 2:05 AM
really like the worldbuilding of this series! I also like the stuff with like the drones being linked and that connection being emphasized. I can't really put it into words, but it's nice and I haven't personally seen other stuff that's done t
12/25/21, 1:22 AM
I enjoyed this installment very much. I think the highlight for me was just the way you narrated the action scenes, which is tough to do in a flowing way, I've found. The first person perspective but using the 'drone network' to give the narrator an almost 3rd person ability to narrate scenes was creative, unexpected, and I think it worked well.
12/24/21, 11:02 PM
I hope this isn't the end. I am looking forward to more. Converting the rest of the frat? More fun messing with Thomas? Whatever is next, I am interested to see what will happen.
12/24/21, 10:37 PM
This is so good. I'm always checking every few days for new chapters. It's got me hooked!
Martin
12/24/21, 9:10 PM
I haven't read this yet (but I will, you can bet on that!) I just wanted to give you the hint that the whole series will inherit the "no-sex" tag (the series inherits all tags from all chapters). I wouldn't use it, if it's only suitable for a single chapter:

felix
12/24/21, 10:30 PM
@Martin Oh! Thanks for the tip. All fixed now, appreciate it :)
12/24/21, 11:46 AM
it's always so exciting to see another chapter of any of your stories. this was amazing! i really wish this level of mind control can be a real thing 😏 Hopefully they had some natural nighttime erections in the mouths of the others. I love those moments when they are aware of the state they're in but can't do anything about it or when the father/son are forced to see each other in a way they are not used to. I could just hear all the sounds in that room 🥰 I love that the boss is this ominous character. Personally knowing more about him or his purpose is not as exciting as watching his work which I hope continues on with more depravity. Fingers crossed for ass eating and piss drinking 🥺

12/24/21, 7:51 PM
@HusbandFirst Thanks for your support! ;) Thankfully, for the servants at least, they are getting some real peace during their sleep, so nothing was to happen during the night and they can just sleep naturally. It's in the Club's best interests to have well-rested, energized servants to keep their members entertained and satisfied! My idea of the Boss character is similar to your thoughts too. We all know there is this ultimate "mastermind" who is running the Club and using these strong mind control measures to keep a stable of slaves. But in the context of my storytelling, the Boss is not important. My main focus is not on the Boss or his powers of control, rather it is mainly on the unfortunate experiences of the Servants subjected to this control and how their lives become out of control having to live through all this debauchery. As you may realize, there are many functions and services offered in such a large Gentlemen's Club...so stay tuned for all of them to be explored as the characters continue to go through their duties (including your suggestions....maybe? ;p).
Ben
12/24/21, 7:04 AM
Loved this!! Hit alot of my buttons!!! 🔥

12/24/21, 7:49 PM
@Ben Thanks! This was my first story.
Martin
12/24/21, 6:15 PM
This was disturbingly hot, damn it!
Dec 24, 2021
12/24/21, 6:14 PM
Is this your first story? Nice work. You laid out the details of this kind of total power exchange relationship well. Nothing surprising here, but this is the classic total power exchange master/slave fantasy in a nutshell. I think it would help if you delved into the mindset of your submissive character more deeply, helped the reader understand why a young man in such a position (3rd year lawyer?) would want to add such a relationship on top of that, and what he's getting out of it aside from the abuse. It would also be interesting to see more of the master's mindset, but I understand these fantasies are usually written from the submissive perspective, and it's pretty normal for the master characters to come across like sphinxes.
Martin
12/24/21, 5:51 PM
What a wonderful story, Cockatrice! It's so beautiful, exactly what I had in mind with Cupid, and yet it feels so out of place, like it doesn't belong to this place full of smut (not meant in any bad way) but to a place of beauty and philosophy. I'm very honored that you've published it here. I think it's the first time that I shed some small tears over a story here. Yes, I cry easily all the time, but still... I can only hope that you'll find your own nature spirit yourself and that you'll take his good advice to your heart. You deserve it. Happy Christmas! And thank you for those beautiful moments I had reading this story!