Recent Comments

12/25/21, 4:32 AM
I love the detail, quickly mentioned, that the guys on the team are now attracted to men. And why not? They share a kind of hive cock and pleasure sensation, which links them to one another's sexual drives and action. The twist ending is great, with Felice dropping the vial and the combined masculine essence of the team spilling out on the floor. I still have a feeling that things are not over and that the machine and the guys will keep going, horny and trying to figure out a way to keep the pleasure going. Amazing story!
12/25/21, 4:19 AM
This scene is spectacular, between the cock shape shifting and Tucker continuing to bulk up and otherwise take masculine essence from the other men. All the while everyone is still linked and able to experience sex in both active and passive roles at the same moment. That machine has really created a special situation among the rugby players.
12/25/21, 3:17 AM
The scene in which Jason and Tucker share an orgasm is unexpectedly intimate, which makes sense as their cocks are linked and so masturbation is really like sex. I am curious if Jason will be stuck with the 3-inch dick that he just pleasured or if his member will change as Tucker's seems to be doing. Really complex dynamics and great psychology in this story. I love the sense of detached intimacy, with each guy alone in their own home but psychically and physically connected with one another in a kind of collective experience of pleasure.
12/25/21, 2:45 AM
I think that one of the more interesting (and unexpected) consequences of Tucker drinking the team's essences is that he is both permanently horny and has a cock that is constantly shape shifting. The psychic link of the other men with Tucker's new cock is really interesting and gives a new meaning to the idea of team spirit! Great chapter in what is shaping up to be a fantastic story!
12/25/21, 2:05 AM
really like the worldbuilding of this series! I also like the stuff with like the drones being linked and that connection being emphasized. I can't really put it into words, but it's nice and I haven't personally seen other stuff that's done t
12/25/21, 1:22 AM
I enjoyed this installment very much. I think the highlight for me was just the way you narrated the action scenes, which is tough to do in a flowing way, I've found. The first person perspective but using the 'drone network' to give the narrator an almost 3rd person ability to narrate scenes was creative, unexpected, and I think it worked well.
12/24/21, 11:02 PM
I hope this isn't the end. I am looking forward to more. Converting the rest of the frat? More fun messing with Thomas? Whatever is next, I am interested to see what will happen.
12/24/21, 10:37 PM
This is so good. I'm always checking every few days for new chapters. It's got me hooked!
Martin
12/24/21, 9:10 PM
I haven't read this yet (but I will, you can bet on that!) I just wanted to give you the hint that the whole series will inherit the "no-sex" tag (the series inherits all tags from all chapters). I wouldn't use it, if it's only suitable for a single chapter:

felix
12/24/21, 10:30 PM
@Martin Oh! Thanks for the tip. All fixed now, appreciate it :)
12/24/21, 11:46 AM
it's always so exciting to see another chapter of any of your stories. this was amazing! i really wish this level of mind control can be a real thing 😏 Hopefully they had some natural nighttime erections in the mouths of the others. I love those moments when they are aware of the state they're in but can't do anything about it or when the father/son are forced to see each other in a way they are not used to. I could just hear all the sounds in that room 🥰 I love that the boss is this ominous character. Personally knowing more about him or his purpose is not as exciting as watching his work which I hope continues on with more depravity. Fingers crossed for ass eating and piss drinking 🥺

12/24/21, 7:51 PM
@HusbandFirst Thanks for your support! ;) Thankfully, for the servants at least, they are getting some real peace during their sleep, so nothing was to happen during the night and they can just sleep naturally. It's in the Club's best interests to have well-rested, energized servants to keep their members entertained and satisfied! My idea of the Boss character is similar to your thoughts too. We all know there is this ultimate "mastermind" who is running the Club and using these strong mind control measures to keep a stable of slaves. But in the context of my storytelling, the Boss is not important. My main focus is not on the Boss or his powers of control, rather it is mainly on the unfortunate experiences of the Servants subjected to this control and how their lives become out of control having to live through all this debauchery. As you may realize, there are many functions and services offered in such a large Gentlemen's Club...so stay tuned for all of them to be explored as the characters continue to go through their duties (including your suggestions....maybe? ;p).