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12/23/21, 4:32 PM
Love this! So hot, and you get across the urgency of these moments so well. Great stuff!
12/23/21, 3:35 PM
ooh interesting! the cock switches between various ones and Tucker is gaining their masculine essence while they change as they loose it! wonder what will happen with the guy with Tuckers cock
12/23/21, 2:38 PM
@amul that was very hot. I wasn't expecting the bull/dom cow/sub relationship. Cody ate some of the chief's cum during his transformation. Did that influence the transformation of Cody to a man cow? Does the bull have to be transformed first? Looking forward to another chapter. Thanks for sharing your talent.

12/23/21, 3:32 PM
@TexMuscle Thanks, Tex! I appreciate the thoughtful comment and your interest in asking those questions. There's some backstory/writer's notes here for sure, I tried to put as much into the story as I could without actually bogging everything down and interfering with the sexy stuff, info dumps usually aren't very sexy so I tried to offload some of that into the "pillow talk" between Cody and Gutierrez at the end but there's a limit to how much I could do there without turning it into a dry conversation, and I still had to give Cody a chance to admire his new body, the least I could do since I didn't let him cum. The dom/sub bull/cow part was my way of trying to add a twist to the muscle cow kink. Like almost everyone else here who appreciates this kink, there's a hand full of authors who we owe this kink to. In my case, that would be @AgainstMyWill (Joey Makes Varsity), and @Absman420 (MilkMan). This story wouldn't exist without their work, and I wouldn't even have this kink - I'm not that creative. The level to which these two lovely gentlemen warped the sex part of my brain is unbelievable. Needless to say, the images of musclemen being milked like cattle have been playing around in my brain ever since. In an effort to not be completely derivative, I imagined the muscle cow transformation as a pairing purely out of furthering the fantasy and wish fulfillment. We're already doing impossible muscle growth, so why not throw in free relationship matching while we're at it? Get the perfect body and you just get assigned a loving muscle daddy at the same time? It's unrealistic fantasy, but it works for me and I hope it will work for my readers. I had intended the semen transfer to be an explicit part of the transformation and bonding in earlier drafts of my story but it didn't work out. It required the Doctor to almost monologue at one point when he should have been doing sexy kinky shit, so I started cutting dialogue and what you see in the story as far as the cum being transfered to Cody is what's left of that. I threw in the little bit where the Doctor wipes some Chief-cum on Cody's mouth to subdue him in a later revision, to deepen the mind-control pheromone aspect of the story because I received some "Where's the mind control?" feedback on the first chapter, even though I felt the hypnotic quality of the Chief's musk on Cody was blatant (and sexy). (I swear sometimes, nothing short of explicit orbital mind control lasers will qualify as mind control to some people). As for the bull having to be transformed first, I'm not sure that's required but it is how things are going in this story. The cops who are groomed for selection are the gay ones who would be into it, and part of the deal is they get a sub muscle cow, who they get to pick from among the precinct. Once that bull is transformed, he has enough power over his target to get him converted too, which is what we saw in this story. Gutierrez, gay, with a thing for his handsome young subordinate, agrees to go along with the Doctor's crazy scheme and in return he gets a phenomenal muscular physique, some of his youth and many times his prior libido back, and most importantly he gets Cody as his. The bonding is two-way though, so at least the bulls will not be tyrannizing their cows, although there is certainly an aspect of nonconsent here which I chose not to explore in this story but am acutely aware of. Ultimately, I aimed for a less dark vision of the muscle cow kink, but I fully acknowledge that some of the darker aspects of those prior stories I mentioned are incredibly hot, not at all misplaced, and their absence here makes my story different but assuredly not better (nor worse, I hope). And thank you for being the first to comment on my story (aside from Martin's administrative advice, also appreciated!). It gave me an excuse to do my own villain monologuing. Merry Christmas!
12/23/21, 1:13 PM
This story is terrifying. I wish Anthony had more love for his brother, like he simply needed Callum to be his and intended to make him his permanent lover. The prospect of Anthony giving Callum away as a slave is heart wrenching.

12/23/21, 1:23 PM
@RedShifter don't want to spoil anything, but in term of that comment, lets just say i like that idea...hehe hope you're enjoying
Anonymous
12/23/21, 12:02 PM
I want to know more about other staffs and characters, what happened to them? How they become likes this?
Martin
12/23/21, 6:43 AM
@amul: You can change the series' title by clicking the "Administration" button on the [series display](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/series/show/10001152). And then you might want to alter the titles of the individual chapters as you like using the normal "Edit".

12/23/21, 11:16 AM
@Martin Thank you very much, Martin.
12/23/21, 10:54 AM
I hope to see more pf this
Tyrol
12/23/21, 9:46 AM
yep. love it.
boi98229
12/23/21, 9:13 AM
OMG! You sure manage to keep the tension full on! I didn't want to stop to make a comment, especially when i last left Archie in a really tough situation, but i feel the need to thank you again for a great story! Normally i get off as much or more on the plot and the D/s context in which any sex might occur in the story, but your description of the sex scenes are so well written, and i relate so closely with Archie that, like Archie, i feel like i'm getting pounded and about to blow. i suppose i pay even closer attention to the details of the sex scenes in part because of Archie's condition and thinking constantly about how his spot is being stroked or pounded. i even envision the body positions to determine how Archie's spot is being struck and how fuckdrunk he might be. Of course that spot on my prostrate gets so excited as Archie has his spot gets pounded. The scene really comes alive.
12/5/21, 5:20 PM
So rooting for Gray, also. Gray brought the beast out. He deserves to own it 😍 I just found Jack Parker about a month ago with "power drain".....so hooked. Not only are your stories great and soooo hot. You really can turn them out. Kudos dude, your stories are amazing. Thanks.

12/23/21, 8:00 AM
@Deco thanis man super nice to hear