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12/20/21, 10:28 PM
AAAAAAAAHHHHH! It must really be Christmas because I didnt expect a story from Tomosco! Such a great chapter and its always a delight to see you do an update in any of your stories. Hope we also get a new chapter for Family Matters. Cheers!

12/21/21, 6:26 AM
Cheers! Thanks @Kyle Chu ! I do still have my plot ideas in mind for Family Matters, but getting the inspiration and energy to dive into it is not always as easy....lol, maybe I'm getting old... ;p But stay tuned!
12/21/21, 1:05 AM
This is well written, as have all the chapters of this series been. I've had a nagging feeling about this series, and I think I can finally put it into words about just what I think doesn't quite work. The level of control that the Boss has over the slaves is so total, and so sophisticated, what with him being able to not only control their actions but turn their emotions and desires on and off instantly, the whole thing becomes like a child playing with dolls. And while playing with dolls is fun, watching someone else play with their dolls leaves something to be desired. This story might benefit from some more pov-controller, since the Boss is really the only consequential character. Similar issue to reality change and amulet stories. And I feel like the author must be aware of this issue, because it's all spelled out at the end of this chapter plainly. While I was slowly coming to this conclusion for myself, suddenly the author was like "Yeah, and none of this even matters because XYZ." And I'm like OK, you're right! You're the author though, so mix it up and fix it.

12/21/21, 6:21 AM
@amul Thanks for your insightful comment. The original idea of this series and the main purpose of the Club having such thorough control over its servants is to basically have a stable of slaves to service its members. So these men were simply "acquired" by the Club to become its property for use by the members like sex toys or tools. It was never meant to be the Boss' own personal play dolls or collection. So there wouldn't be the concern of "*watching someone else play with their dolls leaves something to be desired*" as you noted. The Boss merely treats them as numbers and properties within the Club, like desks and chairs, with personal attachments or feelings about them being used or abused by members (he needed them exactly just for that). The scenario I put in this chapter of the servants being made to play with each other behind closed doors was more of just a show of how complete the Club's mental control is over them, and perhaps also an added sidetrack to demonstrate how evil and perverted is the mindset of the Boss. Evil if not performing for the Club members or for anyone to see at all, the Boss just wants to deliberately humiliate and debase these men by forcing them to get on with each other for no good reason....just because he can and the men didn't even stand a chance to defend. Perhaps I didn't explain that quite clearly enough in the story, but I hope this helps clarify the main purpose of why these men were being dragged into the Club in the first place. ;)
12/21/21, 6:00 AM
Hope more is to come. Great chapter!
Anonymous
12/21/21, 5:59 AM
hope there's more to come!!
12/21/21, 4:46 AM
This was such an unbelievably HOT chapter! The BottomsUp and its affect on Brody was so well written! The public humiliation at the park (bob is a nice twist), the details of every moment and the plug slipping fully into the Jock while riding his bike, had my imagination (and dick) going crazy.
12/21/21, 4:30 AM
Russell is everything to me right now and if he ends up in love with a stuffy, the little in me is gonna squee for eternity haha
12/21/21, 4:04 AM
such a hot story...love the humiliation of the Brody and all the pictures Mr Cabot took...i cant wait to hear about where they get posted/shared. Stuffing his jock ass with all the vegetables and fruit, like the 5 whole oranges was awesome. How humiliating i cant wait to read more, see if Brody and his dad eat them too :)
12/21/21, 1:34 AM
great series. keep them cumming!
12/20/21, 11:16 PM
this story is absolutely zanny! i love how ridiculous and adorable it is. all the drama and stakes are hyped up to 1,000,000,000% exaggeration and it's adorable. the manimals concept is super fun and cute and more complete than the idea i originally had of 'guys who want to be pups full time' this makes much more sense while being completely over the top! hank, the hunk manimal walker himbo. i cannot even. ALSO looks like both himbo and pup chose their owner, huh? Mister Mo, huh? i wonder if he eats............... sushi! LOLOL this was entirely delightful, i eagerly await more.

12/20/21, 11:20 PM
@Mind Labyrinth It might be June and I'll still be posting chapters! 😂
Cracker
12/20/21, 7:51 PM
Another hot story

12/20/21, 9:55 PM
Thanks @Cracker