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Anonymous
3/9/25, 11:59 AM
So hot!
Anonymous
3/9/25, 6:52 AM
Fuck, the whole story is quite hot, I've told you before, but the chapters of Nick being corrupted and twisted, with him thinking about his failure as a hero and his need to belittle himself and be servile are fire. I love his new costume! Would be great if you go deeper into the descriptions of how the gear looks and how it feels: the slippery surface of rubber; the squeeky sounds it make when you move; the feeling of it squeezing the body; the weird sensation of being hot and cold at the same time (that have happened to me when I wear it); how sweaty you get inside of it; the feeling when you or somebody put lubricant on you to make you look shinier... sorry, I don't want to be annoying, but as you may have noticed, I'm a rubber enthusiast LOL. If you allow me a suggestion, you could give some rubber hip waders to some of your characters (not necesarily Nick). Those look super hot, and since those are made to be into mud or water, you know, to get dirty, the implication is that it's a piece of gear that a person in a high rank would rarely or never use, so they're more for the opposite of a boss (I like roleplay too, you can say). Same goes for certain models or rubber boots or long gloves in bright colors or in thick rubber, used by janitors, heavy workers, etc. And a friend of mine said some people like to put lubricant or other substance inside waders, boots, gloves and rubber suits, you know, to maximize pleasure and give different sensations, so... Sorry if I've talk too much. I blame Nick for that, he being mentally corrupted and becoming less and less heroic give me so many thinks to think about! Keep making great stories, I love your work!

3/9/25, 11:15 AM
@Anonymous Thank you very much! And don't worry, there's no such thing as talking too much here! (Otherwise I'd be in trouble,...) I appreciate your suggestions and your insights, so maybe they'll shape some things to come. We'll see :3
3/9/25, 3:01 AM
Yeah, there is no going back for Nick. There hasn't been ever since he first fell. But he is truly and wholly in his Master's hands. Yet that need to revisit the past in order to succeed in his present is a clever twist. Creates questions about what is real and what is true; and trapped in what has been made 'true' for him. And I am so happy to see rubber back in full force. And the singlet that Nick is in is so twisted and sexual. And Nick still wanted it. Though I am surprised he didn't get put into some type of null bulge or cage with how valuable his milk is. And no mask or hood. Fully exposed in that outfit. Though how 'small' are you imagining this singlet? I take it the suit really presses into him as if its two sizes too small. Would you say it more like a one-piece swimwear with it having almost no shorts part of the singlet? And its humorous and arrogant how both sides, Kurt and Hank are both being overconfident in themselves and undercutting their rivals. And both are already considering the Defense Force lost. Yet if the original Mister Freedom is back, then who else has been upgraded? And does MF have the same 'weakness' that can be exploited again? I can only imagine what his reunion with Hank or Kurt (as Tri-Hard) will be like. It really feels like three-way chess is unfolding before us. And that is exciting.

3/9/25, 3:25 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you very much! There are some reasons for Nick's costume choices, ones that should become a little clearer next time (also considering how his touch is needed to use his powers). The singlet _does_ have some length of shorts, duly lubed up as Nick was 'helped' in to it, but maybe not the full length one would expect. As for **Mister Freedom**, it's worth remembering that he can't have his 'old' powers and weaknesses back. The new formula could have been used to give him powers, but he permanently lost his old ones. Of course, that's assuming his only weaknesses are based in the super-serum playing with his head,... I'm looking forward to exploring the coming clash with you! Hope you enjoy when it comes ;)

3/9/25, 5:12 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Well if I remember correctly, the old serum magnified what was already there. He just had his duty and his wife as his pillars to keep him in check. But that doesn't take away his current predicament of his submissive needs he was getting off from Nick and Henry. Or his past. There is no denying he loved what he had with Hank at the shop too. Which might make him a double edged sword. A new serum wouldn't take that away from him. Yet that doesn't mean a new serum wouldn't or couldn't have an influence too. It could just set him up to fall again. Wouldn't that be a cruel yet satisfying twist to give him a chance at redemption to only be a slave to his base desires again? Heck, he has been a pup to every party involved. But I won't deny that is what I am hoping for. It just seems to his fate in this series.

3/9/25, 11:11 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Who knows what might happen with Carl,... we'll just have to see! :3
3/9/25, 8:50 AM
Such a great story! I imagine Ryan will have his work cut out for him after 86 days of 4 hours of hypno files :) hoping the loop breaks, but that connor still retains some what he's learned
May 24, 2024
3/9/25, 7:30 AM
I always liked this story, and I miss the late, lamented Malebots.com.
3/9/25, 6:30 AM
Great muscle cop
8/11/24, 7:42 PM
I agree with the people who are leaving comments this story does need to continue and there are still some details of the store you didn't talk about and you could talk about other people like bullies other classmates and does he have any other friends and you kind of left on a cliffhanger near the end of this chapter and if he learns to control his power correctly and if he does anything else with his power.

3/9/25, 6:03 AM
@[Jordan nightraven](/user/show/10019915) It's more that life post-pandemic has gotten very busy. I'm glad you enjoy it. I also experienced writer's block when I tried to continue it back in 2020.
Anonymous
3/9/25, 5:59 AM
Fuck, I'm dying to read the follow up! Nick looking like Hal, Kyle, beer, and you writing using your dirty hot demeaning dialogues to turn superheroes into brainless meek sluts.
3/9/25, 5:52 AM
I hope you get back to it eventually. It's a fun premise and I giggled at the dialogue changing shenanigans. Absolutely seated for a gay arthurian mindfuck porn parody
3/9/25, 5:29 AM
Babe, wake up. There’s a new Drone Force chapter.