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12/21/21, 8:55 AM
Looks like Brad set himself up to bevome another mindless drone. can't wait to see where this goes!
Dec 20, 2021
Ben
12/21/21, 8:12 AM
First story? Didn't seem like a first story to me! This is one of my new favorites, can't wait for more from you 🔥 🔥 🔥
12/21/21, 8:09 AM
Wow. Just wow. I am really loving this series and this chapter was a real banger.
12/20/21, 10:28 PM
AAAAAAAAHHHHH! It must really be Christmas because I didnt expect a story from Tomosco! Such a great chapter and its always a delight to see you do an update in any of your stories. Hope we also get a new chapter for Family Matters. Cheers!

12/21/21, 6:26 AM
Cheers! Thanks @Kyle Chu ! I do still have my plot ideas in mind for Family Matters, but getting the inspiration and energy to dive into it is not always as easy....lol, maybe I'm getting old... ;p But stay tuned!
12/21/21, 1:05 AM
This is well written, as have all the chapters of this series been. I've had a nagging feeling about this series, and I think I can finally put it into words about just what I think doesn't quite work. The level of control that the Boss has over the slaves is so total, and so sophisticated, what with him being able to not only control their actions but turn their emotions and desires on and off instantly, the whole thing becomes like a child playing with dolls. And while playing with dolls is fun, watching someone else play with their dolls leaves something to be desired. This story might benefit from some more pov-controller, since the Boss is really the only consequential character. Similar issue to reality change and amulet stories. And I feel like the author must be aware of this issue, because it's all spelled out at the end of this chapter plainly. While I was slowly coming to this conclusion for myself, suddenly the author was like "Yeah, and none of this even matters because XYZ." And I'm like OK, you're right! You're the author though, so mix it up and fix it.

12/21/21, 6:21 AM
@amul Thanks for your insightful comment. The original idea of this series and the main purpose of the Club having such thorough control over its servants is to basically have a stable of slaves to service its members. So these men were simply "acquired" by the Club to become its property for use by the members like sex toys or tools. It was never meant to be the Boss' own personal play dolls or collection. So there wouldn't be the concern of "*watching someone else play with their dolls leaves something to be desired*" as you noted. The Boss merely treats them as numbers and properties within the Club, like desks and chairs, with personal attachments or feelings about them being used or abused by members (he needed them exactly just for that). The scenario I put in this chapter of the servants being made to play with each other behind closed doors was more of just a show of how complete the Club's mental control is over them, and perhaps also an added sidetrack to demonstrate how evil and perverted is the mindset of the Boss. Evil if not performing for the Club members or for anyone to see at all, the Boss just wants to deliberately humiliate and debase these men by forcing them to get on with each other for no good reason....just because he can and the men didn't even stand a chance to defend. Perhaps I didn't explain that quite clearly enough in the story, but I hope this helps clarify the main purpose of why these men were being dragged into the Club in the first place. ;)
12/21/21, 6:00 AM
Hope more is to come. Great chapter!
Anonymous
12/21/21, 5:59 AM
hope there's more to come!!
12/21/21, 4:46 AM
This was such an unbelievably HOT chapter! The BottomsUp and its affect on Brody was so well written! The public humiliation at the park (bob is a nice twist), the details of every moment and the plug slipping fully into the Jock while riding his bike, had my imagination (and dick) going crazy.
12/21/21, 4:30 AM
Russell is everything to me right now and if he ends up in love with a stuffy, the little in me is gonna squee for eternity haha
12/21/21, 4:04 AM
such a hot story...love the humiliation of the Brody and all the pictures Mr Cabot took...i cant wait to hear about where they get posted/shared. Stuffing his jock ass with all the vegetables and fruit, like the 5 whole oranges was awesome. How humiliating i cant wait to read more, see if Brody and his dad eat them too :)