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12/20/21, 3:42 AM
The body changes confused me, maybe it was the puppy food from when he was in Jack's house. Anyway - the twist at the end here made perfect sense to me. Why wouldn't he have dominated the neighbors? Why would he take their son when he lived right next to them otherwise, that's a hell of a risk. Glad I found this older series, it's a great one.
12/19/21, 10:31 PM
It was never explored in the original story, but I hope Hank will be abused too just like his son.

12/20/21, 12:53 AM
you should read the original from the beginning, it's a hot story. @ZackF
12/20/21, 12:52 AM
Man for a sec. I thought this was going to be a new chapter. This is such a hot story.
12/19/21, 11:47 PM
This is a very good muscle growth story, it hits all the right notes to fulfill the common fantasies. I added a few tags, which I hope is ok - audio indoctrination, brainwashing, straight to gay. These felt like major kinks in the story that were untagged.

12/20/21, 12:17 AM
@amul Thanks for the additional tags! I didn't think about those and I feel like it gives the reader a more accurate sense of what to expect.
12/19/21, 10:13 PM
Awesome first chapter with excellent writing! I look forward to part two.
12/19/21, 9:57 PM
ready for acquisition, i need it
Dec 18, 2021
12/19/21, 6:20 PM
Oh, this is awesome! The pacing of the story, the tightness of the prose, and it all comes together in a really hot way. And my mind went much the same direction as Readytochange's -- when's Max getting added to the collection? And as *what*? Haha!
12/19/21, 4:42 PM
Loved it, soooo many boxes ticked!
12/19/21, 3:29 PM
Uhm. Muscle daddies, rubber suits and incest? ... hot. xD
CountessHyde
12/19/21, 3:15 PM
Can wait for the next story. I'm so invested