Recent Comments

12/19/21, 10:31 PM
It was never explored in the original story, but I hope Hank will be abused too just like his son.

12/20/21, 12:53 AM
you should read the original from the beginning, it's a hot story. @ZackF
12/20/21, 12:52 AM
Man for a sec. I thought this was going to be a new chapter. This is such a hot story.
12/19/21, 11:47 PM
This is a very good muscle growth story, it hits all the right notes to fulfill the common fantasies. I added a few tags, which I hope is ok - audio indoctrination, brainwashing, straight to gay. These felt like major kinks in the story that were untagged.

12/20/21, 12:17 AM
@amul Thanks for the additional tags! I didn't think about those and I feel like it gives the reader a more accurate sense of what to expect.
12/19/21, 10:13 PM
Awesome first chapter with excellent writing! I look forward to part two.
12/19/21, 9:57 PM
ready for acquisition, i need it
Dec 18, 2021
12/19/21, 6:20 PM
Oh, this is awesome! The pacing of the story, the tightness of the prose, and it all comes together in a really hot way. And my mind went much the same direction as Readytochange's -- when's Max getting added to the collection? And as *what*? Haha!
12/19/21, 4:42 PM
Loved it, soooo many boxes ticked!
12/19/21, 3:29 PM
Uhm. Muscle daddies, rubber suits and incest? ... hot. xD
CountessHyde
12/19/21, 3:15 PM
Can wait for the next story. I'm so invested
Dec 18, 2021
12/18/21, 6:59 PM
This was wonderful! What were your tags, pup and statue?

12/19/21, 2:23 PM
@amul Yep!

12/19/21, 2:53 PM
@Dace Incredibly impressive imagination! Difficult set of tags and you combined it in a totally unexpected way to create a story that resonates with the introverted and people who have difficulty connecting with partners. And I love happy endings, so your decision to end the story where you did was just perfect as far as I'm concerned.