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3/8/25, 10:21 AM
Really love how you wrote Connor internalising the Hypno script he's hearing
3/8/25, 10:19 AM
Excellent, love this type of mind control and the inclusion of the foot fetish makes this an s-tier story for me!
3/8/25, 9:28 AM
Extremely hot!
3/8/25, 7:46 AM
When can we anticipate a part 2?
3/8/25, 6:48 AM
Man hoping finished before end of contest
Anonymous
3/8/25, 5:24 AM
Ohh, please tell me there will be a part 3! I'm imagining a couple of possibilities and all of them sound hot.
3/7/25, 10:55 PM
Gladly willing to help theorize! But note this is speculative, I'm not the author and I have a sappiness and romantic bias to everything I read; The central thesis and central point of what Jamie has been through, of what the symbiote has gleaned, of what Master has seen, and even what Luxor and everyone else in the League has realized, is that Jamie is fundamentally a lonely person. He doesn't have friends. He doesn't have anyone left. No family, nothing. I think that is what "Master's" plan is referring to, and I have a suspicion that Dusk will be right with Jamie during his final conversion. Maybe it's a sex scene similar to the fan story with Horizon made by cops. Maybe it's like the dream sequence where the new superdrone holds hands with his fellow superdrone as it joins its "found family". Maybe we can see Jack and Dylan again, both of them encouraging Jamie to give in Onyx was right about the mind bending, but I have reason to believe that it works so damn well on Jamie is because he is fundamentally needy, he craves connection and he wants so badly to be loved and cared for. I'm guessing that's a tiny part of the hook that he used during gym time, and I think Master might manipulate/utilize this vulnerability to the maximum especially now that it's confirmed confirmed there's a crush What exactly will Master toy with his Dusk to find the breakpoint for Jamie to fully submit during the final stage (is that next chapter or the chapter after? I feel like the climax is about to occur, both the story and for Jamie!), but I think that it's a part of what will occur!

3/8/25, 4:44 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) I think I agree with pretty much all of that. Good job, tofu.
3/8/25, 4:10 AM
I'm assuming Ethan is a a salaried employee or Dr. Wale is unaware of the concept of overtime.
3/6/25, 2:32 AM
This is so sweet! I love it!

3/7/25, 9:58 PM
@[Niemand63](/user/show/909148) Thank you very much, glad you liked it ! ^^
4/17/22, 6:54 AM
Please do another chapter. Maybe have someone else from the tour group go off to find Chris and meets both him and Kaa?

Spiral Desires
4/21/22, 8:36 PM
@Auraseer11 So the loosest idea I have is something along the lines of Chris waking up in the treetop, mind blurry, confused and wearing a red loincloth. He slowly recalls the previous night and feels a sense of despair at how quickly he succumbs to Kaa and how hopeless he feels, almost like he's never going to escape his power. Then Kaa appears and he and him discuss this very thing. Just when Chris feels he is doomed, Kaa offers him a choice, one last challenge and he will use his powers to free him, forgetting Kaa completely and letting him move on with his life. That challenge is simple, Kaa has to make Chris cum and Chris has to not look in his eyes. Kaa ends up coiling his prey up and edging his cock to oblivion until it becomes so intense, Chris is so desperate to cum that he finally looks in Kaa's eyes. And that's it, he's just sealed his doom. Then maybe there's a short prologue about another tour group a few years later and someone spots a mancub in the forest in a red loincloth, his eyes look completely unique though, with yellow pupils. Who knows what he's up to? But I'm sure his master always wants more fresh toys to play with!

8/22/22, 11:28 PM
@Spiral Desires That sounds amazing!

3/7/25, 6:39 PM
@Spiral Desires Please write this! I’ve been waiting for a sequel!